Apoleone 2024 - First Page
Added 2024-02-03 05:58:25 +0000 UTCHello my friends. I got a mega cold π€§. My health is a kind of fragile. Even so I finish this first page of Apoleone. The pages can receive updates, so take the opportunity to suggest an improvement in English if it is needed. π₯³
Comments
oh, i get it now xD
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 20:00:10 +0000 UTCThe 5Β° frame is looking tottaly wrong. It was my cold drawing in my place.
Winter_Fairy
2024-02-03 14:45:48 +0000 UTCThanks. The rain is a personal joke. When someone call me to go out and I don't want.
Winter_Fairy
2024-02-03 14:31:02 +0000 UTCI love how Olivia is looking so elegant, even speaking french, such a refined and hot ladyπ and the air conditioning and laptop brands are priceless xD
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 07:29:31 +0000 UTCThe comic is looking good, i just noticed one detail in the second text, "to make me hang out" would be more correctπ Also, is it fine the text "under this rain"? is not supposed to be sunny and hot outside?π€
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 07:22:29 +0000 UTC
