Anya's true powers!
Added 2023-03-04 16:40:35 +0000 UTCfinal part of this comic! i hope you like it! i will be reading your comments if you have noticed something wrong about the text and that, remember that helps mme to improve my english lmao
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thank you so much!
2023-03-04 18:00:05 +0000 UTCI can help with spelling and grammar if you'd like then. Left text above Yor is good. Middle text has a few 1. "I've been fucking with all these whores for months" 2. "turns out my powers are not just to read minds" 3. "because these bitches are extremely loud" And right text above Becky ocation should be spelled occasion. That should be all of them, but if you wanna get nitpicky when someone refers to themself as "i" it should be capitalized
MapleLafayette
2023-03-04 17:00:10 +0000 UTCOnly typos I see is ocation, the term is occasion and Lloyd's name but no big deal lol XD but legit besides that there is good flow and easy to follow, I'm sure when you color and detail the text will be even clearer :D P.S. edit: is it wrong that I also wanted her to include Lloyd? LOL
The Big_Red_Machine
2023-03-04 17:00:05 +0000 UTC
