right so this is a first draft of a vidya about elon's dumb loop system
looking for some feedback so maybe I can make alterations before the full version is released this weekend. unsure if the pacing feels right or if some stuff feels disjointed or maybe i didn't explain some points as well as i could, especially in the second half -- let me know in them there comments because i value your feedback
oh also it probably won't be full quality for another 45 minutes or so after i post this just fyi
Darrin Michelson
2019-01-19 19:52:29 +0000 UTCALTbrown
2019-01-19 04:25:02 +0000 UTC