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新しい物語(ネーム)/ New Story (draft)




現在は英語だが、いずれ日本語に翻訳できればと思っている。

Currently in English, I hope I can translate the story in Japanese later.


左から右へ読む。

Read from left to the right.


story(draft)

Synopsis

Wealthy and influential, Mr. White is a formidable figure in the city's business circle, but behind his respectable facade lies a dark and secretive life. Unknown to the public, he is the mastermind behind the city's largest strip club, using his power and influence to conceal his true activities. With a particular taste for innocent girls, he employs hypnotism and drugs to lure and manipulate his victims, bending them to his will and adding them to his "collection."

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Characters

Mr. White

Mr. White is a mysterious and powerful businessman, with a hidden dark side.

His wealth and influence are well-known, but what many don't know is that he owns the biggest strip club in the city and has a secret talent for hypnotism, using drugs to control and manipulate. He is a man of many desires and will stop at nothing to get what he wants.


Alice

Alice, the devoted secretary of Mr. White, is a loyal follower of her boss.

Once a powerful CEO of a prominent company, Alice fell under the sway of Mr. White and underwent a transformation that made her his obedient and devoted subordinate.


Rina

Rina is the newest addition to the office, instantly noticeable for her striking looks and graceful demeanor. Despite the attention she's garnered, she's determined and has established herself in her current career.

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Story Text

Page 1


Mr. White : (Ah, there she is. Rina, a fresh face in the office. She's a real looker. I've been watching her for a while now, and I must say, she's caught my eye. She's got a great body, and she moves with such grace. She's exactly the kind of girl I need for my new collection.)


Mr. White : (I've been observing her, and I know she has the potential to be a part of my exclusive "collection." You see, I have a taste for the finest things in life, and She is a diamond in the rough, waiting to be polished and showcased. I intend to make her mine and add her to my roster of exquisite companions.)


Page 2


Mr. White called Rina into his office, his personal secretary by his side. Mr. White wasted no time in getting to the point.


Mr. White : “As you know, I'm a businessman and the owner of this company. But I have another venture I'd like to discuss with you. I run the biggest strip club in the city.”


Mr. White : “I've had my eye on you, Rina. Your poise and confidence have caught my attention. I believe you would be a perfect fit for my strip club. I want to offer you a position as one of our featured dancers.”


Rina : “I... I'm really not comfortable with the idea, Mr. White.”


Mr. White : “Ah, Rina, I expected as much. But let me make the offer even more enticing. If you agree to work at the club, I will also promote you to be my personal secretary here at the company, with a substantial raise in pay.”


Rina : “I'm flattered, Mr. White, but I must refuse. I have a reputation to uphold.”


Page 3


Alice : “Think about it, Rina.”


Alice : “This could be a huge opportunity for you. You'd be making more money than you ever have before. And you'd be working for one of the most powerful men in the city.”


Rina : “I'm sorry, I just can't do it.”


Alice : “Time is a luxury we don't always have, Rina. Mr. White needs an answer, and he needs one now.”


Page 4


*spray

*moaning


Alice : “Oops..., our friend here has suddenly taken a nap. Perhaps a little too much excitement for her.”


Mr. White : “It seems the dosage was a bit too strong for her.”


Mr. White : “But no matter. We'll proceed to the next step as planned.”


Page 5


When Rina woke up, she found herself on a sofa in an unknown place. Mr. White was sitting in front of her.


Mr. White : “Welcome back, I want you to relax and focus on my voice. You're feeling very calm and receptive to my suggestions.”


Mr. White : “You're a very suggestible person. You want to do as I say, and you crave the feeling of obeying me.”


Rina : “Yes...”


Rina : (His voice is so compelling... I can't tear myself away. I want to resist, but something about his tone makes me want to listen and obey.)


Mr. White : “Good girl, now, tell me, who are you?”


Rina : “I... I'm Rina.”


Mr. White : “Are you sure?”


Rina : (Am I sure? Of course, I'm Rina... right? But why am I hesitating? I know who I am... don't I?)


Mr. White : “Let's see... What do you usually wear to work?”


Rina : “I... I usually wear office clothes. A blouse, a skirt...”


Mr. White : “That's not what you're wearing now, is it? Look in the mirror and tell me what you see.”


Page 6


Rina : “How did this happen? Why am I wearing this?”


Mr. White : “Because this is your usual working outfit.”


Rina : (Am I truly not Rina? But I know I am... don't I?)


Rina : “I don't know...”


Mr. White : “You're clearly not yourself.”


Mr. White : “But I can help you figure this out. Trust me, follow my voice and we can unravel this together.”


Rina : (His words are soothing, and I feel like he genuinely wants to help me. Maybe I can trust him.)


Rina : “Okay...”


Mr. White : “Good.”


Page 7


Mr. White : “Now, I want you to say out loud.”


Mr. White : “I am not Rina.”


Rina : “I am not Rina.”


Mr. White : “Repeat it.”


Rina : “I am not Rina.”


Mr. White : “Repeat it, and embrace the truth.”


Rina : “I am not Rina.”


Mr. White : “Are you certain?”


Rina : “Yes, I am not Rina.”


Page 8


Mr. White : “Then, who are you?”


Rina : (Oh, god! I don't know who I am! How can I not know my own name?)


Rina : “I... I don't know.”


Mr. White : “Don’t worry, I'll help you fill in the blank.”


Mr. White : “Your name is Rinny.”


Mr. White : “Say it.”


Rina : (Rinny... The name feels odd, but also right somehow.)


Rina : “Yes, my name is Rinny.”


Page 9


Mr. White : "Now, Rinny, look into my eyes."


Mr. White : "You are a whore, Rinny. say it."


Rina : (A whore? Is that what I am?)


Rina : “I... am a whore.”


Mr. White : “Again, and believe it this time!”


Rina : “I am a whore!”


Rina : (I am a whore, and I am proud of it.)


Page 10


Mr. White : “Rinny is the best stripper. Say it! own it!”


Rina : “I am the best stripper!”


Rina : (I am Rinny, the seductress, the temptress. Men will desire me.)


Mr. White : “Rinny is Mr. White's slave. You live to serve me. Say it!”


Rina : “I am your slave, Mr. White!”


Rina : (I belong to him, and I will do anything he desires. The thought of serving him, of being completely under his control, excites me beyond measure.)


Mr. White : “Good girl. Now, let's get you started on your job.”


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