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bit of rock polish

not done but some updates 

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/j272i3eznuzl890/AACoz9uEBIQHUG9v3-QiCdLVa?dl=0

bit of rock polish

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i agree with you on the rock face. right now they really are just VERY basic and i will be cleaning them up. this folio will be ready thursday. i really want to build some SFW monsters as 3d models and will the eventual 2 weeks per folio i will be able to do things like that

Hatton Slayden

For once i find that the "very sketched background" works fine except in the "hanging around" and "upside cliff face" pictures. I'd like to be able to offer more precise feedback but i've been overworked all last week and this week too seems to be going that way. Let me see: It might possibly have something to do with the fact that while the other backgrounds feel like almost "empty void aside from a few lines" those two specific backgrounds is where you went and detailed it more, therefore drawing more attention to the sketchiness of them. I'd almost suggest putting a picture of rocks and filtering the heck out of it just like you did with the mountain, but i think that in this case it might work against you as it would get the focus away from the protagonists, as the cat lady has a very similar color to the rocks and the fact that she's more defined than the rocks works to her advantage. So yes, i'm sorry but i don't think i can help much here because the problem is probably too subjective, as i said, it works fine for most pictures. 😖😔

Simone Spinozzi


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