Yeah... I hope the comments were constructive enough. π
Simone Spinozzi
2017-12-07 17:11:00 +0000 UTC
roger all that ;) i will have the next update before the days end
Hatton Slayden
2017-12-07 17:10:07 +0000 UTC
You asked me to go more in detail before you finish something, here i am.
- Barbearian, looks almost ready for launch, i'd tweak the snow though.
- Kitty Lady, looks still incomplete i withhold any comments
- Leap Of Fluff, looks almost ready for launch, I'd tweak the background as it's blurred "badly" as in it does not look out of focus, rather a low resolution texture, possibly due to the large strokes with sharp edges.
- Pirate Cannon, looks almost ready for launch, however here the lady is the least detailed object in the picture so either you add details to the lady or you find a way to remove details from the background.
- Queen's Delight, looks almost ready for launch (assuming she has a white coat and white eyes, which would not be at all out of place π€) however, for the rock and tree see my comments on the leap of fluff background.
- Sensuous Serpent, looks perfect.
- Tigress Knows, i'm assuming this is incomplete as it has "tigress" in the title and this looks like a puma with a tiger face, however at the moment the background is more detailed than the foreground, so be sure to balance that in the end picture π
- Vixen Pounce, You know what?! π€ Aside from the mouse (which now looks too sketchy compared to the rest) and possibly adding some black details on the vixen i would count this as complete.