Update on The Initiation
Added 2022-01-16 18:26:16 +0000 UTCGreetings Programs!
I think I finally figured out how to end The Initiation.
Unfortunately, it means an extra page.
But overall, I think it works rather well.
I've uploaded the new roughs for both pages above.
The only panel were I might ad some additional dialogue would be the final panel on page 23, but it would only involve random comments about what's about to happen at the party.
Would love to hear your input on these last two pages.
