Update time...
Added 2022-01-07 22:13:15 +0000 UTCGreetings Programs!
Giving you an update on the final pages of The Initiation.
I'm sure you're wondering why I haven't posted anything since the last page.
Well, its because there's ALOT of characters. LOL
But as you can see, I'm getting closer to finishing page 21.
Just lots of stuff going on. Crowd scenes take an insane amount of time to do.
Now, my big questions is for page 22 which is also posted above.
As I have it now, I hint that the frat is going to crash the football party to feed their hunger.
Should I have it like that? I know final digestion is not a thing for some.
So should I keep it like it is? Or ad a bit of dialogue saying its not permanent?
I'm totally open to suggestions on this one.
Or, I do two versions?
Love to hear your thoughts on this.
Comments
Yeah, I was thinking along those lines. Just need to work that into the dialogue. :D
Graphite
2022-01-08 12:55:37 +0000 UTCWow! marvelous. Moving the story forward in this way not only explains why it happened, but it also allows the story to have an extended ending, allowing the story to become a common story that often occurs in characters. And this setting can be extended to all your stories. You can also let the protagonist choose whether it is temporary or permanent. You are really smart.
Zhang Wenhao
2022-01-08 05:54:15 +0000 UTCThe only thing though is that they shouldn’t be giving the “gift” to those outside of the frat. So perhaps something to mention that only those “annointed” by the senior member will gain the ability to grow and vore. So anyone consumed by the regular members will be reformed, but won’t have the same abilities as them and perhaps won’t remember the experience.
T
2022-01-08 00:37:57 +0000 UTCI think its fine as is, it's only a hint for fatality. If you're worried and wanted to hint non-fatal instead you could swap the words "hungry" to empty and "feed" to "fill" and it should read close to the same but lean more towards suggesting non-fatality while still allowing for both readings. Not sure which way the whole audience leans in regards to that whole thing since I know I'm a big fatal fan myself lol.
Stepfan Huntsman
2022-01-07 23:57:16 +0000 UTCI think that reforming would be another skill to learn, under the guidance of cock.
DragonAnima
2022-01-07 23:04:20 +0000 UTCI think the cocks are permanent but they can be bigger when they vore someone with their cocks.
Andrew Steiner
2022-01-07 22:53:00 +0000 UTCI'm not going to show what happens at the football team party, so its possible both types could happen. But as it is now, it hints that the vore will be final. And a lot of people viewed their appreciation for reformation, and not be final.
Graphite
2022-01-07 22:30:59 +0000 UTCPersonally... I'd really get off on consuming a hot quarterback. LOL
Taylor T
2022-01-07 22:24:12 +0000 UTCWas that too much of a ramble? LOL
Taylor T
2022-01-07 22:23:08 +0000 UTCI prefer letting the prey live... I really like that all these hot studs are becoming like their host's cock... big cocks eager to consume other hot guys... passing it on to the next generation... Maybe consuming... and "returning" is an "option" they must learn... Their cock's natural instinct is to "CONSUME" their prey... but they must learn they can return the guys they take ...if they choose to. Sometimes, while learning how to do this... they accidentally consume a hot target... totally... oops! ...and their cock is thrilled when this happens... so they learn they get greater pleasure from totally consuming a hot guy... so that is their preference... but they struggle with deciding the final fate of their prey each time.
Taylor T
2022-01-07 22:22:03 +0000 UTCI'm always down for some permanent cum digestion and ejaculation, especially since we had reformation in this one already. But variety is the spice of life and either would be good, I just always lean towards prey being nothing but cum in the end.
ButterBear
2022-01-07 22:21:03 +0000 UTCCould they do a mixture of cock and oral vore at the party?
Tre Nawoc
2022-01-07 22:20:20 +0000 UTCI'd be down for not permanent, so if it's not a lot work maybe 2 dialogue versions?
KojimaSoujiro
2022-01-07 22:17:14 +0000 UTCpermanent! especially if they get the bodies of the football players they put down their cocks
ian thiry
2022-01-07 22:15:54 +0000 UTC
