Chapter 15 - A Truth Revealed

Interesting. I'd been wondering about that detail myself.

Ryvius

Yup, you've got that right. However, seeing as Fates is directly connected to Awakening, thousand sof years prior, something I thought would be a fun idea was to have Chon'sin be the current form of Hoshido, or something similar at least. So the name of Kagerou was passed down to the lead Kunoichi, retainer of the Empress. That's why I had Say'ri comment about "the name she bore", Kagerou has become a title, same as what Saizo was.

Got it in one! Nice!

Haha, while it would be a funny thought indeed for Robin to be Corrin's father, unfortunately that's not Mikoto at the end there. That's Say'ri! But, I definitely wanted her to give off vibes similar to Mikoto, being a sincere, regal leader of her country. So I'm actually really happy you said that! -J

Hi, Great to hear, glad you enjoyed it. Interesting comment about preferring Robin with more characters to let them all ahve some time to shine... I think you'll quite like what I've got cooking up for the next chapter! -J

That’s what I assumed at first, but wasn’t Kagero Mikoto’s retainer?

I think the lady featured in the ending was Say'ri

Chris L

P.S. So did I misread that ending, or is Robin gonna be Corrin’s dad in this timeline? In that case, he’d still be half-dragon... sorta. It’d be interesting if that was Canon for your other story. Also: sheesh, doesn’t Robin have a large enough potential harem already without adding girls from other games?

Great chapter! The dramatic, comedic, and erotic parts were all done well. It’s true, I do want Robin to tell Lucina, but I have the advantage over him of knowing that it’s going to turn out fine (maybe even better than fine) in the end. I liked the description of Panne’s home, and the lemon with her (been waiting for a while). One criticism I have is that you seem to do your best when you have different characters interacting with each other. This chapter was entirely Robin x one other character at a time. Hard to avoid with the plot you have, admittedly, but it didn’t play to your strengths as well as it could have.