Red Equinox Page 14 Completed
Added 2017-04-18 04:11:02 +0000 UTC
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well thanks for letting me know, ill change the sfx, its how i make this comic better with comments like this! this will be updated shortly!
Battu
2017-04-18 18:01:27 +0000 UTCMy only critique is something that is a modern comic convention that I've always had a problem with: using verbs as sound effects. such as "CATCH!" when someone catches something, "SHOVE!" When someone is pushed out of the way or, in this case "REST". A "CREAK!" to remind us of his mass would, to me, be much better. ("FLUUSSH" works because it is an onomatopea of sorts, like "CRASH"). But, this is a personal issue for me...
Anymouse
2017-04-18 17:45:13 +0000 UTC
