Billy #1 & 2 feedback
Added 2021-02-19 13:34:29 +0000 UTCI must say I really enjoyed writing this story. There's something about a muscular stud completely dominating a curvy bimbo that never gets old. But that's my opinion. What do you guys think? Is the story to your liking? What do you want to see next? Leave some comments below and let's share your thoughts! :D
Comments
You're right. I've added some more lines to the ending paragraph. Should be better now! :D
Nick563
2021-02-20 10:56:02 +0000 UTCI thought the description of the final conquest of the teacher was a little lacking. Also, I thought it could have been a bit rougher and less merciful, like your other stories, his extremely large cock should give her quite a bit of pain, but of course she still loves it and begs for it because the extreme organs make up for it.
Lyme24
2021-02-20 07:47:41 +0000 UTCMost likely he'll have a rival or some punk who thinks he's the real alpha
Nick563
2021-02-20 01:03:05 +0000 UTCNothing like total stud loving. But maybe competition? That may ge difficult for you to write but hey, an idea
I. Nobes
2021-02-19 19:37:42 +0000 UTC