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Billy #1 & 2 feedback

I must say I really enjoyed writing this story. There's something about a muscular stud completely dominating a curvy bimbo that never gets old. But that's my opinion. What do you guys think? Is the story to your liking? What do you want to see next? Leave some comments below and let's share your thoughts! :D

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You're right. I've added some more lines to the ending paragraph. Should be better now! :D

Nick563

I thought the description of the final conquest of the teacher was a little lacking. Also, I thought it could have been a bit rougher and less merciful, like your other stories, his extremely large cock should give her quite a bit of pain, but of course she still loves it and begs for it because the extreme organs make up for it.

Lyme24

Most likely he'll have a rival or some punk who thinks he's the real alpha

Nick563

Nothing like total stud loving. But maybe competition? That may ge difficult for you to write but hey, an idea

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