Ellie - Ab Work (Short Story)

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When Ellie looked down at her stomach muscles, she could get lost. The smooth, tight crunch of her abdomen was hypnotic. The ten-pack that so many girls desperately sought flared to life through her leotard, trapping the fabric to show through the light clothing as though she were naked. With the pattern of her favourite leotards she mixed in, she adored the display she could make of herself.

It wasn't a pride that she liked to throw in others faces or use to belittle other students - unlike so many high rank Academy girls. No, this was for Ellie. Whether she was trying out new ab control techniques in the mirror or catching glances of herself between intense sessions. This, in fact, was the latter.

"Are you asleep, Watson?" the booming voice of Coach Kent rattled her head, and she was back in the gym. She was soaked in sweat. Her abs were on fire. But she obeyed her Coach as she heard the order, "Faster!!"

A half dozen silver collars were splayed across the sweat stained mats around them. Some had barely managed to sit up, propped up by arms and elbows. Others were spread eagled, sobbing, or covered their eyes with shame. The four hour marathon of expertly crafted core destruction had broken every student in the room one by one.

All but one. And now Ellie had her Coach's full attention. She was on the incline sit-up bench, legs tucked away. She could do two reps a second, if not more. And Coach wasn't going to let her stop. She wouldn't let her down. Ellie had watched each silver collar in the class collapse in tears, and wouldn't expect anything less of herself. The girl grimaced and tried to speed up, her sweaty ginger locks swinging around. Her grunting was loud, uninhibited.

"Left!" Coach Kent would shout, and Ellie twisted. Her knife-like obliques nearly shredding her outfit again as she engaged an equally ready part of her core. Then the call of right. Back and forth, variations were demanded of her, keeping her focused, keeping her mind and muscle connection as she worked. Ellie didn't waver. But she relished the growing pain in her abs, knowing each rep took her closer to all she could bare...