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Freudian Flip - You Write the Caption

Okay! First, I want to thank everyone who took the time to submit to the "You Write the Caption" contest. I loved reading all of the entries! ❤️ And if yours didn't win, don't be too sad - I saw plenty that I'm likely to steal for later (with proper credit, of course 😊).

Without further ado, the winner was... B.B. ! Congratulations! 🥳 They wrote:

This is the story of a thirty-year old womanizer. One day, he decided to see a psychologist as he had been suffering from a depression for few months without knowing the reason. What he did not know, was that the psychologist was a woman he slept with few years ago. The psychologist saw in this situation a good opportunity to get her revenge : she told him that he suffered from depression because he unconsciously wanted to be a woman. The womanizer believed her, and he decided to take feminine hormones and to undergo surgeries. One year later, the former womanizer got her sex reassignment surgery, the psychologist's revenge is now complete as the womanizer is now a beautiful and feminine woman.

I'd expected this to be a fun, simple caption. But, uh, it turned out to be 10 pages with custom art that I created for the story. I really hope you like it!

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Comments

Thank you!!! That would be a really cute sequel, to be honest. 😊💖

Emory Ahlberg

Such a cute story, I'm getting a sense that even if someday she'd tell her about lying to her at therapy originally and Apologizing that Johanna would just bust up laughing at the idea that "Task Failed Successfully" 😆 and forgive her

Juliet Taylor Briar

Hi Bell! I'm glad this story resonated with you and fulfilled your previous request. I do remember! And it's wonderful to hear that it didn't disappoint! 💖 As for turning this into an ongoing story, it's a fascinating idea, tbh. The dynamic between Joanna and the therapist could open up a world of possibilities. After all, every character holds a universe within them waiting to be explored.

Emory Ahlberg

You've certainly got a keen eye for detail! The art is a combo of Photoshop and Daz3D, with a sprinkle of SD for refining. As for improving, the secret ingredient is always practice. Keep experimenting and playing around with different tools, and you'll continue to grow and evolve in your skills. 🎨💻

Emory Ahlberg

It's like a narrative rollercoaster ride!!! Thank you, Ella! 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Maggie! I'm absolutely delighted to hear that you enjoyed the story so much. And hey, who can resist a good idea, wherever it comes from? 😉 Your words about Joanna are so touching. It's wonderful to hear that her journey resonated with you. After all, beauty blooms from within, doesn't it? And sometimes, it takes an unexpected path to reveal it. 🌸

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Diana! Life is full of surprises, even in fiction! 😉📖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Robert! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this story. It was a fun change of pace and a big challenge. And yes, a big shout-out to BB for the fantastic initial suggestion and to all the patrons who contributed their ideas!!!

Emory Ahlberg

I’ve been waiting for this. I don’t know if you remember but I once asked for a similar story. And you didn’t disappoint. I hope it wouldn’t be too much to ask to turn this therapist and Joana into an ongoing story. As the therapist begins to use what she’s learned with joana to change men for the. Well will see

Emily Morgan

Not only did you score another perfect goal; I'm a soccer fan; but your art is so good I cannot decide it if is Photoshop or Daz3D or some A.I. or a mixture of all of the above. May I ask if I'm right in my guess? Don't be cruel; my dearest muse, tell me, if only to help me get better at this. I never expected my caption submission to win, but now I feel like Jason/Janelle after she woke up with a pussy.

Female-Bosmer-Always

Dark, then getting lighter, to end cute! Love it! ❤️

Ella Cherry

This is sooo cool that this happened... I'm wondering how many will you steal from later places before you announce another new contest... 😁🥰😘❣️ This story is AMAZING ❣️❣️❣️I cried at page 9... WOW Joanna is BEAUTIFUL inside and outside...

Maggie Heels

Love this story. Lisa helped Joanna find her own identity, even if she believed it was revenge.

Diana Bialaska Hansen

Wow! What a great story and a lot lighter than most of yours, Emory, from an excellent original suggestion by BB. I enjoyed reading all the other suggestions too and it was clearly a successful initiative that generated a lot of interest and imagination amongst us patrons. Well done to you for thinking of it, ma’am.

Robertlouis

Wow! Thanks, Sam! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

One of the best

Sam May

I'm really happy you liked it, Halima! In this case, I decided to go for a different angle. I like to mix it up! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Yay! Thank you, Estacia! I'm so glad you enjoyed writing your caption. It was so fun! Arabella's story is definitely on my list. ❤️

Emory Ahlberg

This was awesome! Congrats B.B.! Emory I had a lot of fun with the You Write the Caption. Reading everyone else's and writing my own was a blast.

Estacia

I was expecting (dreading) a much darker twist, where he'd be brainwashed into thinking he was trans, but I'm glad we got the lighter version instead.

Halima Abdi

Yes, they were fun to read! Like I said, I plan on doing more of the submitted stories in the future. ❤️

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, maven! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Excellent writing, excellent story.

maven poulter

That's okay. I still holding to hope for my Jack and Jill multiverse idea for future captions.

Tiki D


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