Half Sisters - Episode 33
Added 2023-05-31 12:32:46 +0000 UTCNikki and Zach receive an unexpected visitor...
Yay! 20 more pages of Half Sisters. I'm fairly proud of the art for this one. I hope you like it. 💖 And, as always, Nikki and Zach are really fun to write.
I can't wait to hear your thoughts!
Comments
It has been awhile since the two stories merged!
Jessica Thence
2025-03-31 03:59:34 +0000 UTCThank you, thank you, ckarya! Your comment made me so happy to read. God, I love how into the characters and story you are. Makes me happy! 💖 With word of Sandy’s disappearance, Zach is done with all of this. But we’ll have to see how his bastard father reacts… And, yeah, Jess is a smart cookie. She knows something is up and she grew up with Nick (even if they weren’t close and she eventually moved away)… You’re definitely on to something with Josh. That’s the last we saw of Sandy’s story and Mortimer had just captured him!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 08:26:26 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Gemma! 💖 I have to admit to really loving the expressions on everyone’s faces in this episode.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 08:22:31 +0000 UTCThank you, Nina!!! Jessica is a smartie pants and Nikki can be a bit dense, so… 🍿😉
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 08:21:31 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Fin! And don’t worry, I won’t tell Jill. 😉💖
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 08:05:16 +0000 UTC🤣 Yeah, she’s definitely feeling something with that bug engine!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 08:04:25 +0000 UTCOooh, a double date would be so fun, punarotta. 😊 That’s a definite possibility… But, yes, first we need to see what’s happening with Sandy!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 06:20:25 +0000 UTCThank you, thank you, Gemma. ❤️ Jessica is a smart girl, and she is definitely suspicious of “new girl” Nikki… She may well figure it all out on her own!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 05:34:35 +0000 UTCThank you so much! God, the motorcycle image has been in my imagination for a while. It was so nice to get it out to all of you. I'm really happy you liked how it turned out! 🏍
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 03:56:21 +0000 UTC💖💖💖 Thank you, Maggie! I was so happy to have Nikki and Jessica meet. Jessica is a smart cookie, so Nikki had better stay on her toes around her... The last time we saw Sandy, she and Mrs. Ferris seemed to have come to a kind of accord... ...but then, Josh seemed to find something incriminating in the manor up near Boston -- and he was caught by Mortimer!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 03:55:30 +0000 UTCThank you so much! And don't worry, you won't have to wait too long to find out Sandy's condition... 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 03:48:39 +0000 UTCThank you so much! More is incoming. I can't wait to hear what you think!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 03:47:42 +0000 UTCShe's having such fun! (but everyone else should always remember to wear a helmet 😛)
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-10 03:47:15 +0000 UTClove the cute petulant girl look you have captured on Nikki’s face in imagine 18 and the uncertainty in Nikki’s face you gave captured in her face when her arms are around Zach on the back of the bike in the last image
Gemma
2023-06-04 01:17:40 +0000 UTCFurther feedback on images in chapter 33.
Gemma
2023-06-04 01:14:55 +0000 UTCamazing work!! excited to see how jessica starts to work things out *eats popcorn*
Nina
2023-06-02 21:07:17 +0000 UTCThe lighting on pages #2 and #3, simply amazing! Pages #8, #9 and #18 made me reconsider my relationship with Jill... Your sustained excellence is to be envied.
findesiecle
2023-06-02 06:01:32 +0000 UTCFirst of all, Em, your art is amazing. Every episode of your stories the renderings get more photorealistic. I love them! 😍 As for the episode, I like how Nikki has backed Sandy up by not telling Jess anything, I sense that besides so he doesn't have to reveal himself, he thinks it should be Sandy who tells Jess who he really is. I also like Zach's reaction, rebelling - in word for the moment - to his father. Jessica (by the way in this episode she comes out looking gorgeous), I think she'll be adding 2+2 shortly if they don't tell her first. And finally, I think I know why Mrs. Ferris and Sandy have returned to Boston -- Josh. Remember that in the last episode of the first season (episode 25), Josh went into Mrs. Ferris' Boston mansion looking for answers for Sandy and was surprised by Mortimer (that's what I think his name was, Mrs. Ferris' bodyguard). Before being caught, Josh found documentation that left him very worried....🕵️♀️ Keep up the wonderful work Em!
ckarya
2023-06-01 12:10:39 +0000 UTCProbably because Nikki is caged, last page makes me think: "What big vibrator you have!" :P
punarotta
2023-06-01 08:32:48 +0000 UTCThat went better than I thought - do we see double date in the future? :D ...of course first we need to find out what is going on in the Ferris household...
punarotta
2023-06-01 08:09:03 +0000 UTCAmazing Emory, fantastic pictures, beautiful story. I too was wondering if Nikki would let Jessica in on her and Sandy secret. Nikki and Sandy will need all the support they can get when they are coeds at St Christopher’s. My favourite image is on page 13, Nikki unconsciously having such a feminine stance when she enters the room. Thanks again, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Gemma
2023-05-31 23:48:25 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! Love that shot of Nikki and Zach on the motorcycle!
Estacia
2023-05-31 17:43:59 +0000 UTCOMG, OMG, OMG... Jess deserves to be completely privy to everything that goes on around this lovely couple. And I hope everything is fine with Sandy. Do we know where she is? I don't remember what was she doing when last time we saw her. And oh... those facial expressions... and all rest... ❣️❣️❣️
MaggieHeels
2023-05-31 16:04:38 +0000 UTCvery nice as usual and more and more
pe zr
2023-05-31 15:27:09 +0000 UTCMy darling muse, once more you have made the wait worth it. Mrs. Ferris seems to have been driven insane by her daughter's murder, but it's good to see Zach finally prepared to stand up to his monstrous wretch of a father. You twisted me like Moebius strip reading this, Emory, my muse. Please tell me Sandy is okay or will be okay eventually.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-05-31 13:44:48 +0000 UTCAlso if Nikki could hear Zach calling her ’noble’...
Alyson Greaves
2023-05-31 13:16:25 +0000 UTCNikki's face on that last page!!!!
Dylan Michael Tackman
2023-05-31 13:15:56 +0000 UTCAnd you should be more than fairly proud of the art for this one. It is — again — incredible ❤️
Alyson Greaves
2023-05-31 13:14:09 +0000 UTCI’m suddenly so scared for everyone* in this comic. *Not dads. This was amazing. I loved Jess not knowing whether to be attracted to Nikki or jealous of her. I loved Nikki standing up for Zach! And Zach finally getting his shit together and preparing to stand up to his father. I think, at this point, that if Zach’s father threatened Nikki’s, she might hesitate and think *really* hard about how worthy he is of her compassion...
Alyson Greaves
2023-05-31 13:12:16 +0000 UTCJess is going to start googling “tomboy camp” the moment she’s alone
Alyson Greaves
2023-05-31 13:02:54 +0000 UTCBut seriously she's really starting to suspect something's up. Maybe it's better if they tell her everything before she does something unadvisable?
Zoe Storm
2023-05-31 12:49:03 +0000 UTClmao Jessica went "be still my lesbian heart" for a moment there when she spotted Nikki
Zoe Storm
2023-05-31 12:48:07 +0000 UTC
