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Half Sisters - Episode 26, "Season 2 Premiere"

Nick and his father spend some quality time together...

Six months after the end of Season 1, Half Sisters is back! 🎉

I truly can't wait for you to see everything I have planned Nikki and Sandy this season. I've also been working on my technique and their shaders, materials, etc. so you should hopefully notice a jump in quality and realism compared to last season. 😊

The first part of the season will focus on Nikki's story, and she was also the subject of a recent story poll where you were asked to choose a PLOT and a CHANGE.

For PLOT the #1 was - "Nikki needs a dress for her date. Unwilling to go alone, she enlists the help of ex-gf Lauren and goes shopping at a thrift store."

For CHANGE the #1 - "Nick had an annoyingly flat butt; nothing he could do would shape it--now Nikki's butt is filling out!"

At least a couple of the other plots and changes will also happen, but it will be a bit down the line.

As always, I can't wait to hear what you think of this episode. 💖

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Comments

Thanks, Jess! I've never had them, but I hear they're a delicacy. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Haha! Bull testicles! I love it! That was a great, and pretty funny!

Jessica Thence

Oof, there’s supposed to be! It’s up in the Mega library and I’ll upload it here as soon as I get to my PC. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Is there a PDF for this one?

Thomas Tolliver

At the museum the guide joked that they needed a company that could make form fitting clothes that would be both supportive and breathable. Then they spend a ton of money researching the best material only to realize they had nothing that would work. So they asked other companies for help. And it was a bra company that had the technology to make the perfect suit.

Emily Morgan

Thank you, Stacy! I really appreciate that. I wanted the outside shots to feel a bit epic. Everything is bigger in Texas, right? 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Jen! 😊 Yeah, I was hoping to capture the mentality of this kind of dad, and I'm glad you think I did it justice. And, yeah, Nikki has been acting macho for so long she now believes it's who she "truly" is. I think part of the reason she ran away from mom was because she was beginning to remember her true self, which scared the hell out of her. I'm LOL'ing at the face Nikki's dad would have if some cowboy came to take his "daughter" out. I'm sure he'll have a few choice words for that guy! Nikki might even join in! 😂

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, Robert! Nikki is struggling with her identity in a big way and her father isn't helping the situation AT ALL. Yeah, her email to "Scott" is just half-truths and denial, but I think that's just her way of coping with the situation. If she can get Scott to believe she's still the same old Nick, maybe she can get herself to believe it too. I'm so, so glad you liked the art! I'm working especially hard on making sure the body language is spot on, as it's so important in conveying a character's feelings. As for the Hutchinsons... I can't wait for the dinner, the date, all of it! We'll be seeing a lot more of Zach this season... and so will Nikki! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Nina! Yeah, Nikki's dad and his toxic masculinity is... a lot! He's so stuck in his ways that he's blind to how his actions are hurting his child. He wants Nick / Niki to be a reflection of him -- a "good" reflection. That means anything Nikki accomplishes is (in his mind) "their" accomplishment... and any failures are entirely Nikki's fault. Ugh. And, yeah, Zach is a lot deeper than he seems and is similarly dealing with a toxic father. Right now, Nikki hates his guts but perhaps they'll start to really connect and build a bond. We'll see. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Pelican! Her father's actions have certainly caused a lot of pain. If Nikki is every going to learn to stand up for herself and become the strong, confident person she's meant to be, she'll need to make peace with who her father ACTUALLY is and not who she wants him to be. The season is going to be a wild ride for her...and for all of us! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

If that happened, I would tell Nikki how cute she looks when she gets mad...

findesiecle

If Nikki were here, she'd make this face at you: 😡

Emory Ahlberg

I did NOT know that! I guess Playtex might have the technology to help Sandy after all. 🤣

Emory Ahlberg

😂 She seems to have noticed the bigger booty as well -- but she sure won't mention that to her "bro" Sandy!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Cry! I'm so happy you enjoyed the return to the series. It was really, really fun to get back to Half Sisters. I love Nikki, despite (and because of) her attitude. You're totally right about not wasting a life. Nick's dad might think he's a hardcore hunter, but he obviously doesn't have a lot of respect for nature. "Denial" seems to be Nikki's middle name at this point. She can't face the truth of what she's been through and the changes that are just continuing to happen. The hormones are straight from Xu (Second Dawn believes in continued customer support!) so they're Mason's enhanced hormones, yes. And they definitely seem to be working the same wonders as they did on all the others! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks so much, Ella. It's been too much fun to write this new season! Nikki's transformation is definitely a process... both physically and mentally! But she's learning so much about herself. Or, at least, we all hope she is! Nikki can be a bit stubborn, though. 😂

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, DJ! I think you'll really enjoy the next episode. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Gorgeous art in this....the colours just pop off the screen. Looking fwd to seeing Nikki's dress and how he/she will react to Zach around his Dad x

stacy C

Growing up in the south this is definitely a spot on mentality with Nikki's dad. And love how clearly Nick's macho alpha act is not only not new but ramped up around her dad. I love the idea that Nikki's dad is only going to make her more desired by men feeding her the way he is lol. Cant wait until he has to deal with some boy come a'callin' on his little quarterback

Jennifer

Nikki is all desperation and denial in this very welcome return. It is just so sad. On the one hand, good for her for not surrendering, but on the other, the total refusal to confront the reality of her changes is harming her mental state, and living with her father, who’s just as damaged in his own way, is only going to accelerate that downward spiral. The upbeat macho writing to “bro” Scott is so false that it’s almost pathetic. Poor kid. Your art, Emory, is superb, with the western light and shading very much to the fore, and Nikki’s body language, the slump in the shoulders, the set of the lips, these details are every bit as eloquent as the dialogue. I’ll be fascinated to see where you take things from here, especially with the forthcoming date with the Hutchinsons. Will Nick/Nikki and her father remember how to play it or will their frontier ebullience create major trouble both tonight and going forward?

Robertlouis

Nikki’s dad is so sad to see :( Weirdly, he reminds me of my own dad. Thinking being masculine and “alpha” is the best thing in the world. The refusal to treat Nikki’s transformation (that he fucking caused by the way!!!!) as anything but trauma is so annoying! I think we’ll see a lot of growth from Nikkei this season. Id almost love more focus on her for this one. She has such an interesting story and I think Zach, although he has a shitty dad, is a fantastic person for her to be around. The two can be normal together while outside they have to hide their true selves. Nikki’s care for animals makes me think she missed that shot on purpose. Her dad killing the animal then just leaving it is vile to me. Hunting can be a vile act when it’s for sport. Hunting for survival or food at least cares for the kill. This seems like a metaphor for what Nikki’s dad did to her by giving her to Xu. I think that Nikki’s real personality could start to shine this season considering it’s obvious her dad is a raging narcissist who tries to live vicariously through his son. Nikki was brainwashed into believing she had to live a certain way. I hope she leaves her dads soon and goes back to her moms where she can actually be cared for. Lovely chapter Emory! The panel of Nikki closing her eyes while her dad shoots is breathtaking! Idk if I was paying attention to detail more this time because the dad felt a little too reminiscent of my own, but so much symbolism!! I love it!! Can’t wait for the next one :)

Nina

I hope someday Nikki realizes what a jerk of a father she has. The man only cares about his ego, not his son/daughter. He's just using her to gain his pride back after been humiliated because of his own wrong doings, and Nikki paid the price. What a ...! I think Nikki will come to a hard realization soon enough her body is hers now and it's not going to change. If anything she's developing quite a nice ass. I'm looking forward to this season. E, you're the best! 👍👏

Pelicanboss

Nikki should have thrown the ball underhand... ;)

findesiecle

Did you know that in 1962 the playtex bra company was asked to make the astronaut’s suit for NASA and they did

Emily Morgan

I find it ironic... that after 21 pages of denial... we see that Nikki's butt on page 22 shows growing female "Ass-sets".

Bowie897

Great return to the series, Emory! It made me cringe so hard when they didn't take what they hunted. Who does that? Venison is great. Make some hamburgers or chili, but don't waste a life. The dude doesn't know what he's talking about at all. Nick/Nikki is definitely in denial about some things. His time with Second Dawn seemed to change his natural temperament more than he's willing to admit, and then there are the obvious changes to his body. In that sense "she" looks great. I'm curious what else has changed on that front. Out of curiosity, are the hormones that Nick is taking now of the normal variety or are they Mason's enhanced hormones from Second Dawn?

Cryofly

Wow, Emory! What a fantastic return! The double narrative is so good, one denying the other. Great storytelling! I love when they try to fight, so chapters like that are special to me. And the body evolution is the cherry on top!

Ella Cherry

C cup would be to much? B is your fav? :) I am wondering how she would look like with C but D/DD is definitely too much to her overall posture ;)

Maggie Heels

Yes great start!

DJ

Okay live commenting go Page six: lmao fuck off dude, stuff that toxicity all the way up your arse Page ten: again, fuck off and stop trying to ruin your kid (any more than you already did) Aaaaand the rest of the pages are more comments like the above, so I'm just gonna abstain and just say: guillottine.

Zoe Storm

Getting home and remembering how absolutely heartbreaking it is when Nikki’s dad mocks her by calling her Tarzan… And all the old bits of Nick when he was young that have started to express themselves — calling the deer ‘beautiful’, for example — being suppressed by her dad over and over again. It’s such an ugly window into the process that turned the sweet kid into Nick The Jock. And the fact that her dad is trying to make her into that again, despite everything, despite that she has to play Nikki The Girlfriend *this very night…!* The man is despicable.

Alyson Greaves

I think Dorley would consider Nikki’s dad unsalvageable! Maybe they would quietly send him to Xu...

Alyson Greaves

Wow, Emory, Nikki looks beautiful!!!!😍 Just a quick comment, I understand and support Nikki's increasing curves in her evolution, but I hope she keeps an athletic body, we already have enough plump "new women": Jill, Janelle, Josie, Angela....😉

ckarya

I'm at work so comments later but for now yay it's back

Zoe Storm

Honestly? My blood boils when I see what Nikki's father says and how he treats his former son... This guy should be sent to Xu Island as well. On page 10 I could have sworn that if this was a "Netflix Original Series" with actors then Nikki would have flinched at the shot. I can understand that Nikki wants to connect with old activities, but dad is not helping here... He was a prick, he is a prick and he will stay being prick... I don't believe that Nikki feels comfortable around him... so why lying to Sandy? How long Nikki will be lying to herself that her dad is not bad to the bone and don't care about her at all... We have here an ideal example of toxic masculinity emanating from Nikki's dad... (hey Aly, Dorley Hall have an upper age limit? :D ) That would be it for now... if something else will pop in my mind I'll post another post... P.S. renders are beautiful ❣️❣️❣️ On page 9 I could swear that Nikki has full makeup... hmmm. Looks stunning even in camo suit 😍 And that beautiful sincere smile in the park tossing a ball eee wait handegg ;) P.S 2. If sometime in the future Nikki wants to give Sandy shooting lessons (for self-defense, for example) it is obvious that they will be shooting at cans and bottles and not at the cute, pretty bunnies, right? :D

Maggie Heels

I'm out of the house so my immediate reaction is just an incoherent scream (but in a good way)

Alyson Greaves


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