Second Draft: Playing with Priestesses
Added 2024-02-26 15:56:57 +0000 UTCOf course we are going to corrupt the priestess, but is she a tough cookie, or a total pushover? I'll let YOU decide, thanks to the wonders of online polling! Pick carefully, as this will no doubt affect the next sexy scene...
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As with most stories, additional character development is necessary to keep readers invested. What is Cassandra's past, ergo her motivations stemming from it. Naturally, there are obstacles to overcome which stimulate change ( I.e growth). Pardon my verbal meandering. I hit a roadblock in my own writing. Keep up the great work.
Richard Weems
2024-02-28 16:08:03 +0000 UTC
