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Alfonse's Amusement Park, Part 2

I decided last month's "Alfonse's Amusement Park" deserved a sequel! ๐ŸŽก

This one starts off right where the original story ended, so I included it in this post. 

This caption is a bit more surreal than most of my others (and long!) but I had a lot of fun writing Drew's tale. I hope you like it! 

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Comments

Thank you, Jess!

Emory Ahlberg

I don't usually like magic caps but this one was fun and the pictures were sexy. Good work.

Jessica Thence

Excellent point, Pelican! Certainly, there's a great expense at changing all of these guys into girls. Even if only a few get surgeries, hormones aren't cheap. Plus, he probably has to pay off the local law enforcement to turn a blind eye, etc. He is definitely making more than of a profit than he would just running a regular carnival! Otherwise, why bother? This is an area worth exploring! As for dipping into his own supply... oh, I'm SURE that is happening, too. LOL.

Emory Ahlberg

An idea: It's obvious Alfonse is a perv and he wouldn't have gone through all the trouble of feminizing these guys just to have pretty girls around in the stores. Stacy was turned into an attraction and lost her piece but how about the rest of them who could make a very profitable market for Alfonse. In fact I'm sure is already using his own products, meaning he's having his fun with the "girls". How many of them you think would end up liking being turned into sissy sex slaves.

Pelicanboss

Not if it is to apply for a job. Who knows, I might get lucky.

Pelicanboss

LOL! I could give you the address, Pelican, but then they'd have to kill me!

Emory Ahlberg

Hehe. What makes me think you wish you were employed by Alfonse, Stacy?

Emory Ahlberg

Where is that amusement park? ๐ŸŽข๐ŸŽก I need to go there. ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿฅฐ

Pelicanboss

This is turning in to a lovely little series.....more victims please hehe :-) x

stacy C

Hmmm maybe Drew should get promotion she wanted so badly... and she should recruit a new member... her old bully from school... to do a non-wanted job giving prizes to snotty-nosed kids for a while and then compensate to him in same manner as Bethany compensate to her with many passionate kisses. ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜š

MaggieHeels

That's an excellent question, punarotta. Maybe Alfonse would promote them AGAIN? ๐Ÿ˜‰

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Maggie! Any thoughts on what should happen next?

Emory Ahlberg

This is sooo good :) please MORE โฃ๏ธ

MaggieHeels

Me too, honestly. Thereโ€™s just SOMETHING (gee, I wonder what?) about girls-who-were-boys finding themselves together that I find really compelling and hot and sweet all rolled into one. โค๏ธ

Emory Ahlberg

It's both a hot and fun premise and I am absolute sucker for "the girls get together and help each other out" plots :)

Alyson Greaves

Drew's work might be shit, but she has great co-workers ;) Promising developments with Bethany, just hoping that she's not just honey-trapping Drew... We've now learned what happens when someone makes Alfonso mad - what happens if someone makes him happy? :D (just wondering; could backfire - not knowing him, end result could be the same, for different reasons)

punarotta

Thank you, Rex! โค๏ธ And awwwww, thank you! Iโ€™m doing my best. Any ideas on what should happen next if we continue with this storyline?

Emory Ahlberg

Good job, Emory. Keep it coming. ๐Ÿ™ Iโ€™M HOOKED on this one. What am I saying? Iโ€™m hooked on everything thing you do here. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Rex

Thank a bunch, Aly! This caption seems much more... hm... esoteric (?) than most of my others, but I truly had a blast writing the thing. Feels like an X-Files episode. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Emory Ahlberg

Hm! Thanks, Kitty! Think we should finally meet the mysterious "Alfonse?"

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Animal. I have some ideas...

Emory Ahlberg

honestly love this

Alyson Greaves

Yes, I too would like to see another part, please.

Kitty St. Clare

Keep going! Great job

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