Half Sisters - Episode 12
Added 2022-01-01 07:49:48 +0000 UTCNick goes to the mall with his mom for a bra and meets someone he didn't expect...
Happy New Year!
To celebrate we have seventeen new pages of Half Sisters. This episode was both very fun and challenging. Thank you to everyone who participated in the story poll! I think you might all still be surprised to see the direction the new character steers the story.
As always, I can't wait to hear what you think!
Comments
I hope you enjoyed the episode, Jess! 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-07 08:09:43 +0000 UTCOh man. What are the odds! Hehehehe.
Jessica Thence
2022-07-05 14:23:58 +0000 UTCLOL - She doesn't appreciate it in the slightest. At least... not yet!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-17 23:23:35 +0000 UTCCall me bell, also I sent you a message, if you get a chance take a look. Hope you like it
Emily Morgan
2022-01-05 20:46:07 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Horn! Your comment was so wonderful to read. You really helped make my night. I love how Lauren came out on the final page! 😀 I love how you think the story will be good no matter the outcome. That's so awesome! I will tell you that a couple of your theories a really close to what I'm planning. 💖
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-05 05:48:09 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Kisten! I'm working on it as we speak. 😀
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-05 05:41:18 +0000 UTCAww... Maybe that's what Nikki was so nervous about when she was talking to Sofia?
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-05 05:40:44 +0000 UTCYeah, I imagine arrogant Nick wasn’t the best (or most loyal) of boyfriends! We know that Nikki is more than little concerned with his mother’s behavior / attitude by the time of her conversation with Sofia. Maybe the “rules” are starting to become more serious? Maybe she sees Nick’s feminization as the silver lining to help him become less of an asshole?
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-04 05:42:11 +0000 UTCbut apparently Nick was kind of a prick, so Hey!
mdaily
2022-01-04 04:17:23 +0000 UTCcoaching mode, that is. also the introduction of the concept of rules! including cooperating with a certain former(?) cheerleader his own age
mdaily
2022-01-04 04:15:45 +0000 UTCit is also interesting that his Miss texas momma is beginning to get into caoch mode.
mdaily
2022-01-04 04:14:14 +0000 UTCAw, thanks, mdaily! I'm, of course, really enjoying the girlfriend angle. I especially like that Nick obviously didn't have a good breakup with Lauren, so it's not clear what her reaction will be if she finds out that Nick now has boobs rivaling (or maybe even bigger than) her own!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-04 03:27:38 +0000 UTCWhat a great version, Maggie! We'll see how close to the mark you are next week when Episode 13 is released. One thing to keep in mind is that Lauren is INTIMATELY familiar with Nick's old body. Maybe that will tip her off somehow...? 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-04 03:25:36 +0000 UTCThank you so, so much, Ella! Nikki is going to resist looking femme for as long as possible. A "She's All That" moment may be in her future, however... 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-04 03:23:17 +0000 UTCLoving the Mother's tough love.....don't think our Nikki appreciates it though LoL x
stacy C
2022-01-03 21:56:04 +0000 UTCSuch a great episode. I can’t wait for the next one
Kirsten Roberts
2022-01-03 21:53:04 +0000 UTCThat look on the face of Nikki's mother says a lot. I can easily imagine her growing to like having a daughter
Emily Morgan
2022-01-03 19:52:23 +0000 UTC😂🤣😂 Not this time around….but maybe soon! That chastity cage won’t stay that big forever.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-03 02:19:31 +0000 UTCThanks so so much, Horn! I admit I’m proud with how the art has advanced this year. Hopefully the improvements keep coming! 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-03 02:18:25 +0000 UTCCrystal, your comment means so much to me. Thank you! That’s exactly what I’m going for: Beautiful visuals, lovely girls, and an engrossing story. That’s a lot, but I hope I at least hit two out of three each time. 😂
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-03 00:29:51 +0000 UTCAwwww. ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much, Keleigh. I’m really having a lot of fun with Half Sisters! I’m glad you are too. 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-02 22:08:49 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Erin! ❤️ Happy New Year!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-02 22:02:55 +0000 UTCthis was so wonderful. I adore the look on Mom's face. She is starting to like having a daughter I think. And the tough love is just what Nikki needs. Not to mention the art work on the last page is some of the best you have ever done. I can imagine it going a number of ways. IE: somehow Nikki ends up agreeing to join the cheer leaders IE: What if Lauren actually recognizes Nikki or doesn't recognize Nikki either way I think it tells a good story, if Nikki doesn't get recognized it really will teach Nikki that NO ONE will ever believe she WAS a guy. If Nikki does get recognized, Lauren will certainly react positively. ANyone I adore Lauren she is very beautiful. And also, rather she likes the bras or doesn't like the bras it also tells a good story: either Nikki realizes how she prefers bras, loves bras or hates them, it is sure to fall in line with generally how women feel about having to wear a bra.
Emily Morgan
2022-01-02 21:26:31 +0000 UTCA very interesting point in the story! Will his former "girlfriend from hell" recognize him or not? will he be honest with her about how he got in his situation? if so, how does she respond to that? Bwa Ha Ha! good stuff! excellent writing!
mdaily
2022-01-02 17:34:19 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter, and I have to say I loved Tom boy Nikki! Happy new year, Emory! ❤️
Ella Cherry
2022-01-02 02:16:00 +0000 UTCThe good news.... at least Nikki will not need to be measured for new panties! (or will she???)
Bowie897
2022-01-01 21:27:11 +0000 UTCMy imaginary engine is now at full speed with possible next events... IDK what Emory is planing here , but let's say my alt version goes like this: Nikki tries to be as tough as possible with this totally unrealistic situation... Lauren at first sight will say... "you look familiar... we've met before?" and Nikki will reply fast with... "Maybe I look familiar to you cause I am somewhat similar to Nicholas that football player who disappeared a while ago, people often say this to me it is like I could be his twin sister" and Nikki will act through all bra fitting process "as authentic as possible"... they will exchange phone numbers etc. and then when Nikki will go out and be alone for a short time she will totally melt with "what just happened??? it wasn't me right? is it?" :D what do you think ;)
MaggieHeels
2022-01-01 21:00:04 +0000 UTCyou really out did yourself on this one, and that girl on the last page. What an improvement in grapchics
Emily Morgan
2022-01-01 20:43:54 +0000 UTCAnother terrific chapter. Nikki looks gorgeous but the story is so involving.
Crystal Peaches
2022-01-01 20:07:28 +0000 UTCThis story just keeps getting better and better!
Keleigh W
2022-01-01 14:53:01 +0000 UTCI know! Ugh! But don’t worry, Maggie. You won’t have to wait a whole month!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-01-01 11:05:12 +0000 UTCWhat a cliffhanger... Jesus... A whole month of waiting for the reaction on seeing ex-boyfriend in new form by this equally beautiful bra fitter girl Lauren Gable... or even longer if we go back to Sofia next time :)
MaggieHeels
2022-01-01 10:43:13 +0000 UTC"Nice hustle, left breast! Right breast needs to work harder. Now go hit the showers!"
Alyson Greaves
2022-01-01 08:45:16 +0000 UTCImagining Jill, Holly and everyone else's who's ever had to deal with Nikki hearing her mum say, "Tough love time," and cheering. Also having fun imagining an alternate version of this episode where the bra fitter was Nikki's old coach.
Alyson Greaves
2022-01-01 08:42:28 +0000 UTCGreat episode! Thanks.
Erin Halfelven at BigCloset
2022-01-01 08:17:07 +0000 UTC
