Jack & Jill - Phase 7, Part 16
Added 2021-03-22 00:18:52 +0000 UTCAs Jack embarks on her date with the loathsome Mr. Davis, she encounters somebody she didn't expect...
Phew! This one was a fun but somewhat challenging episode of Jack & Jill. I'm really enjoying writing the insights into Jill's mind via her journals. Now I miss them in the older editions and wish I'd introduced the idea earlier. ๐
Really can't wait to see what everyone thinks of this one. Especially the ending!
The PDF will be up later tonight. And, as always, thank you so much for your support!
Comments
Can't wait to hear your thoughts, Jess!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-09-17 21:20:49 +0000 UTCWhat a fun one. Looking forward to seeing how this develops. This is a situation you don't often see in TG fiction, I really like it.
Jessica Thence
2021-09-17 14:24:02 +0000 UTCWould you now? Then stay-tuned. Madison isn't as wholesome as she appears. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-31 18:04:36 +0000 UTCI wish Jill had more sex scenes and maybe focusing/teasing her ball-less state
dov
2021-03-31 17:11:02 +0000 UTCThank you, France! This is definitely an old wound (self-inflicted) of Jack's, which has now come to visit Jill in the present. How will she interact with her ex-girlfriend? So much depends on Madison's reaction....
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:21:00 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Fin. I suspect Jill is doing her best to keep a brave face...but there has to be something both terrifying and (a little) gratifying at being the center of attention! LOL.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:19:35 +0000 UTCWe'll see!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:18:57 +0000 UTCAh. Maybe, Tiki. If I have time! ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:18:46 +0000 UTCGood question! Who would Connor be, technically? Hehe.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:18:30 +0000 UTCHorn, I think you're onto something!!! Madison will probably think THIS is why Jack broke up with her...
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-26 06:15:26 +0000 UTCJill's facial expressions on pages 10 and 11 aren't convincing me that she isn't also feeling more than a bit of pride over the public reaction to her exquisite feminine charms. The hand poses on page 15 are a master touch.
findesiecle
2021-03-25 06:29:39 +0000 UTCI know exactly what her response will be just from the look in Mad's Eye....."OMG.....I NEVER KNEW!!!!.....O WOW you look fantastic.....let me take a good look at you baby.......WHY DIDN'T you tell me you wanted to be a woman......I'd have fully supported your decision to transition......wow I can't believe it,.....She gives Jill a hug and says I always hoped we'd reconnect and now we don't have to worry about those awkards can we still be friends time, hell, we could be girlfriends now!!!
Emily Morgan
2021-03-24 23:57:32 +0000 UTCWhat is fascinating about this part of the story is that Jill is moving towards a new romantic dimension of herself and I noticed one really interesting thing that is Jill's observation towards Madison that leads us to believe in an obscure will of the Jack era and that is the phrase; "Until I start to realize I was falling in love. So naturally i broke up with her" . Awesome EA.
France Day
2021-03-23 22:51:38 +0000 UTCLOL - You never know, Bowie. Maybe she'll enjoy working for Mr. Xu.... ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 19:18:08 +0000 UTCI have two words to say to Madison: "GET OUT!!!"
Bowie897
2021-03-23 14:47:27 +0000 UTCIm also wondering if Conner will become a woman would be true, not just an alternate universe theory.
Tiki D
2021-03-23 13:27:05 +0000 UTCI'm just wondering if Conner will get to Jill or get captured?
Tiki D
2021-03-23 13:24:12 +0000 UTCIs it Jill's sister-in-law or is it the brother-in-law who has turned into a pretty woman?
Erica Rost
2021-03-23 11:51:04 +0000 UTCEmory, I mean night pictures of Jill modeling.
Tiki D
2021-03-23 07:23:45 +0000 UTCThey're doing SOMETHING to make her more...ahem...receptive. We already know she's been hearing subliminal messages to make her move in a more feminine manner. If these subliminal recordings can do that, what else can they do? ๐จ
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:40:20 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Ella! Jill's introduction to the "real world" (even in this limited context) is definitely the next step on her journey. As she said, what happens to her on the island is one thing because it's in isolation. Everyone there knows what she "really" is, which is both a blessing and a curse. In the real world, everyone will just assume she's a hot girl and treat her as such -- essentially turning her into one "for real." At least, that's the theory. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:38:54 +0000 UTCLOL! Jack's ex-girlfriend might have to take him to get his ears pierced...... ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:37:00 +0000 UTCThank you, Arnbjorn! I couldn't help myself but do the "distracted boyfriend" meme. And I think Madison is really pretty! Do you?
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:36:21 +0000 UTCAbsolutely, Tiki. This is certainly a test of her resolve not to spill the beans about her true situation.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:35:33 +0000 UTCPerhaps! Although "for a change" is more like "forever."
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:35:03 +0000 UTCHow difficult for her!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:34:37 +0000 UTCYou mean the old nip and tuck? ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:34:26 +0000 UTCShe is very shocked, that's for sure!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:34:05 +0000 UTCCan you explain more, Tiki?
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:33:53 +0000 UTCThat's a good point, Tiki! Girls want to be him, and guys just want him. LOL.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 06:33:42 +0000 UTCI think she just doesn't mind showing her smarts off anymore!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 05:57:52 +0000 UTCGood question, Tiki! Also, remember, Jack is supposed to be dead! Does she now that? Tune in next time to find out... ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 05:44:09 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Chris! What as your favorite part?
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-23 05:39:59 +0000 UTCThank you, Phil! I really enjoyed introducing the new character and what it means for Jill. And yep! I meant to do so last night, but I got pulled away. Iโll upload it to the Library today. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-22 18:58:48 +0000 UTCGreat chapter with a great twist. will you download a pdf of the story when it is done?
Phil G
2021-03-22 18:49:30 +0000 UTC๐ Yep!!! I couldnโt help myself!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-22 16:46:04 +0000 UTCI'm also wondering if Xu and Davis are using sexual seduction music in Jill's room and on the boat to trigger her feminine desires. Are they going to give her special meds to make her docile during her sex change surgery?
Tiki D
2021-03-22 15:43:08 +0000 UTCThere's a meme in there.
Jonathan Tay
2021-03-22 12:09:39 +0000 UTCWow Emory! What a chapter! The night setting is beautiful. I love Jill dealing with the real world and the end with the surprise meeting. Killer! Canโt wait for the next chapter!
Ella Cherry
2021-03-22 11:22:22 +0000 UTCWow that's pretty FU even for Davis....poor Jill (hehe). They'll be able to swap make-up and hair tips :-) x
stacy C
2021-03-22 10:55:18 +0000 UTCI loved panel 10/17
Wes Adams
2021-03-22 04:06:13 +0000 UTCI bet Davis and Xu plan for this to happen at some point for not just Jill going to the mainland, but to test her see if she will panic and escape and adding his formal flame and her reaction to the mix.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 03:26:30 +0000 UTCOr maybe Madison will think that this will be good for Jack to experience life on the other side of the heel for a change.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 03:01:02 +0000 UTCI think Dream Mason is foreshadowing the next step of Jill's Journey into women hood.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:54:25 +0000 UTCI like Jill's reaction to the people on the mainland. She feel like an object desire to other men.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:52:03 +0000 UTCI bet Madison will have a field day seeing her formal boyfriend get his just desserts.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:49:58 +0000 UTCEmory, I was wondering can you do nighttime shots of Jill.๐
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:48:06 +0000 UTCJill is experiencing a role reversal do to men being attracted to her and other women being jealous. When Jill was Jack, he attracted women towards him and making other guys jealous.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:47:15 +0000 UTCJill's IQ has increased greatly.
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:44:18 +0000 UTCWow!!!! Jack's old flame!!!! I didn't know he had a serious girlfriend. I'm wondering what her intentions to her formal boyfriend would be? Would she help her escape or probably enjoying her formal boyfriend be objectify by other men, just like Jack was objectifying other women behind her back?
Tiki D
2021-03-22 02:43:06 +0000 UTCSo goooood
Chris
2021-03-22 01:33:37 +0000 UTCI couldn't resist. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2021-03-22 00:53:17 +0000 UTClol @ Page 10
Fredricton
2021-03-22 00:39:31 +0000 UTC
