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The Collector - Part 1

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Okay! Here it is - my first ever attempt at combining animation and captions.

It's a little rough in spots, but I learned a ton. Next time will be even better.

But I'd really appreciate your feedback on this one. It took a great deal of time. Was it worth it? 

I plan on some sexier animations, too. ;-)



Comments

If only English was my first language I would write a fan fiction for sure :P :P :P

Ucciuburdu

Aw--Thank you and agreed! I'm quite intrigued by the idea. In fact, that's one of the reasons I haven't worked on Part 2. I feel like it deserves a close examination. Maybe that will be my next story once Jack & Jill is finished. 😁

Emory Ahlberg

yeah! Your art is great, I hope you can work on part2 soon or later. And btw I feel like The Collector is that kind of story which deserves more than a captation or an animation. I mean "The Collector" and Gerald seem interesting characters. A full story development like Jack and Jill could be interesting for looking more deeply at their minds :) :) The collector seems to be that kind of guy who can "force" people to do what he wants in a much more subtle and "alluring" way than Mr Xu can do. I'm really curious to look at the other people he "collected" in the past

Ucciuburdu

Thanks! Honestly haven't stared work on it yet, but it's on the docket. :)

Emory Ahlberg

this is so good :) When Part 2? :P :P

Ucciuburdu

Thanks, Jess. It was certainly a challenge, but I had a hell of a lot of fun doing it. I'm going to work on the next bit as soon as my new computer arrives.

Emory Ahlberg

Interesting style Emory. As you probably know, I personally perfer the pic caps, but I think this is a very unique way of presenting your ideas and I am intrigued.

Jessica Thence

Glad we're on the same page. I've always thought an Emory f2m sequence/caption would be something quite special. Something about the way your stories play with power and gradual submission really gets me going. More than happy to help bounce ideas around if you feel like it. Would personally love to see a slow detailed series, but I'm sure whatever you do will be divine.

Collateral Changes

You have exactly the right idea, Collateral! I only hope i can do it justice. :D

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks so much, Sarah. Your enthusiasm is a real boost. :)

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Stacy!!!

Emory Ahlberg

Omg yes

Sara Dune Tone

Great work Emory....can't wait for more :-) x

stacy C

That's amazing to hear, Mike. Good encouragement to keep going. :)

Emory Ahlberg

Aw, thanks, Aline. That means a lot! :)

Emory Ahlberg

Oh I love it! Can’t wait to see more of the story and your evolution animating!

Ella Cherry

I like the animation. I like the story plot. I like the characters. Thanks for posting.

Mike R Pen

Oooh that sounds absolutely scrumptious. Perhaps there's some shift in the power dynamic as the wife comes out of her shell and becomes stronger than her husband. Her curves melting away as her pecs and arms swell in muscle mass, hair sprouting over her shrinking chest and increasingly toned body. Her deepening voice whispering seductively in her husband's ear as he lays helplessly under her strong rough hands. Oh god I may have to sit down :o.

Collateral Changes

I tried with my smartphone, it gave a similar, but less detailed, error message.

Frederic Janssens

LOL!!!!! Thank you, Ryllus. Now THAT is encouragement! :)

Emory Ahlberg

Hey thanks, Callum! Yay!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Jen. Your comments always boost me. :)

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks for the feedback, Frederic. That's invaluable. And glad you liked it, too. :)

Emory Ahlberg

:( That's odd. Can you access it another way? If not, I'll send you a direct link to a Google drive.

Emory Ahlberg

Me too, me too! ;)

Emory Ahlberg

Oh! And more is coming for certain. :D

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Collateral! I'm glad I converted you, LOL. And yes! I'm planning a f2m / m2f series where a husband is feminized while his wife is masculinized. :D

Emory Ahlberg

Love the new narrative. I wasn't much of a fan of captions until you converted me with your devilishly enticing scenarios. "The _men_ and women don't always start out as they appear?" Oooh do tell, are planning on writing an f2m series at some point? I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, but that would honestly make my year.

Collateral Changes

That's so nice, Bobbie. Thank you!!!

Emory Ahlberg

I'm so glad, James!

Emory Ahlberg

Aw, thank you, Doc. I worked really hard on that part in particular. I believe it brings a little life to the animation.

Emory Ahlberg

You did a particularly good job with the eye animations.

Doc Byron

I loved it!

James Towers

This is another level of splendid. More please? :))

Bobbie

Awesome. I can totally see how much work that would be. Looking forward to the really good part coming up

Artemesia

Seems to be due to the fact that I try to access it from Belgium.

Frederic Janssens

For the contents ; yes it is worth it. What I would try to do better first is the fluidity of movement, specifically the gaming scene is too jittery.

Frederic Janssens

That’s odd. It’s working for me, even logged out on another computer. Anyone else having trouble?

Emory Ahlberg

uses HTTP Strict Transport Security (HSTS), so no exception possible, dixit Firefox.

Frederic Janssens

mega.nz uses an invalid security certificate. The certificate is only valid for the following names: *.services.belgium.be, services.belgium.be Error code: SSL_ERROR_BAD_CERT_DOMAIN

Frederic Janssens

The mega.nz link does not work :

Frederic Janssens

wow great animations!

Jennifer

*Picks jaw off floor.* That was amazing! Good job!

Cameron

Woah that was really good

Callum MacDonald


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