The Collector - Part 1
Added 2018-10-02 12:00:46 +0000 UTCDOWNLOAD LINK FOR HIGH QUALITY (also in case Youtube takes it down because boobs)
Okay! Here it is - my first ever attempt at combining animation and captions.
It's a little rough in spots, but I learned a ton. Next time will be even better.
But I'd really appreciate your feedback on this one. It took a great deal of time. Was it worth it?
I plan on some sexier animations, too. ;-)
Comments
If only English was my first language I would write a fan fiction for sure :P :P :P
Ucciuburdu
2019-09-01 16:20:52 +0000 UTCAw--Thank you and agreed! I'm quite intrigued by the idea. In fact, that's one of the reasons I haven't worked on Part 2. I feel like it deserves a close examination. Maybe that will be my next story once Jack & Jill is finished. 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2019-09-01 10:11:20 +0000 UTCyeah! Your art is great, I hope you can work on part2 soon or later. And btw I feel like The Collector is that kind of story which deserves more than a captation or an animation. I mean "The Collector" and Gerald seem interesting characters. A full story development like Jack and Jill could be interesting for looking more deeply at their minds :) :) The collector seems to be that kind of guy who can "force" people to do what he wants in a much more subtle and "alluring" way than Mr Xu can do. I'm really curious to look at the other people he "collected" in the past
Ucciuburdu
2019-08-31 17:31:16 +0000 UTCThanks! Honestly haven't stared work on it yet, but it's on the docket. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-30 23:58:52 +0000 UTCthis is so good :) When Part 2? :P :P
Ucciuburdu
2019-08-30 23:13:42 +0000 UTCThanks, Jess. It was certainly a challenge, but I had a hell of a lot of fun doing it. I'm going to work on the next bit as soon as my new computer arrives.
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-25 09:35:33 +0000 UTCInteresting style Emory. As you probably know, I personally perfer the pic caps, but I think this is a very unique way of presenting your ideas and I am intrigued.
Jessica Thence
2018-10-25 00:30:46 +0000 UTCGlad we're on the same page. I've always thought an Emory f2m sequence/caption would be something quite special. Something about the way your stories play with power and gradual submission really gets me going. More than happy to help bounce ideas around if you feel like it. Would personally love to see a slow detailed series, but I'm sure whatever you do will be divine.
Collateral Changes
2018-10-07 05:39:07 +0000 UTCYou have exactly the right idea, Collateral! I only hope i can do it justice. :D
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-06 06:57:55 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Sarah. Your enthusiasm is a real boost. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-06 06:57:12 +0000 UTCThank you, Stacy!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-06 06:56:19 +0000 UTCOmg yes
Sara Dune Tone
2018-10-05 11:19:51 +0000 UTCGreat work Emory....can't wait for more :-) x
stacy C
2018-10-04 14:02:47 +0000 UTCThat's amazing to hear, Mike. Good encouragement to keep going. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-04 07:11:47 +0000 UTCAw, thanks, Aline. That means a lot! :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-04 07:11:20 +0000 UTCOh I love it! Can’t wait to see more of the story and your evolution animating!
Ella Cherry
2018-10-04 04:58:46 +0000 UTCI like the animation. I like the story plot. I like the characters. Thanks for posting.
Mike R Pen
2018-10-04 04:07:41 +0000 UTCOooh that sounds absolutely scrumptious. Perhaps there's some shift in the power dynamic as the wife comes out of her shell and becomes stronger than her husband. Her curves melting away as her pecs and arms swell in muscle mass, hair sprouting over her shrinking chest and increasingly toned body. Her deepening voice whispering seductively in her husband's ear as he lays helplessly under her strong rough hands. Oh god I may have to sit down :o.
Collateral Changes
2018-10-04 01:20:15 +0000 UTCI tried with my smartphone, it gave a similar, but less detailed, error message.
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-04 00:57:24 +0000 UTCLOL!!!!! Thank you, Ryllus. Now THAT is encouragement! :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:29:38 +0000 UTCHey thanks, Callum! Yay!
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:29:23 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Jen. Your comments always boost me. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:29:13 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback, Frederic. That's invaluable. And glad you liked it, too. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:28:56 +0000 UTC:( That's odd. Can you access it another way? If not, I'll send you a direct link to a Google drive.
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:28:27 +0000 UTCMe too, me too! ;)
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:27:41 +0000 UTCOh! And more is coming for certain. :D
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:27:30 +0000 UTCThanks, Collateral! I'm glad I converted you, LOL. And yes! I'm planning a f2m / m2f series where a husband is feminized while his wife is masculinized. :D
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 19:27:11 +0000 UTCLove the new narrative. I wasn't much of a fan of captions until you converted me with your devilishly enticing scenarios. "The _men_ and women don't always start out as they appear?" Oooh do tell, are planning on writing an f2m series at some point? I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, but that would honestly make my year.
Collateral Changes
2018-10-03 14:45:45 +0000 UTCThat's so nice, Bobbie. Thank you!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 07:01:38 +0000 UTCI'm so glad, James!
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 07:01:29 +0000 UTCAw, thank you, Doc. I worked really hard on that part in particular. I believe it brings a little life to the animation.
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-03 07:01:20 +0000 UTCYou did a particularly good job with the eye animations.
Doc Byron
2018-10-03 03:41:51 +0000 UTCI loved it!
James Towers
2018-10-03 03:21:48 +0000 UTCThis is another level of splendid. More please? :))
Bobbie
2018-10-02 23:12:11 +0000 UTCAwesome. I can totally see how much work that would be. Looking forward to the really good part coming up
Artemesia
2018-10-02 23:02:18 +0000 UTCSeems to be due to the fact that I try to access it from Belgium.
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-02 22:57:35 +0000 UTCFor the contents ; yes it is worth it. What I would try to do better first is the fluidity of movement, specifically the gaming scene is too jittery.
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-02 22:51:44 +0000 UTCThat’s odd. It’s working for me, even logged out on another computer. Anyone else having trouble?
Emory Ahlberg
2018-10-02 22:36:30 +0000 UTCuses HTTP Strict Transport Security (HSTS), so no exception possible, dixit Firefox.
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-02 22:36:02 +0000 UTCmega.nz uses an invalid security certificate. The certificate is only valid for the following names: *.services.belgium.be, services.belgium.be Error code: SSL_ERROR_BAD_CERT_DOMAIN
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-02 22:34:25 +0000 UTCThe mega.nz link does not work :
Frederic Janssens
2018-10-02 22:33:55 +0000 UTCwow great animations!
Jennifer
2018-10-02 13:54:56 +0000 UTC*Picks jaw off floor.* That was amazing! Good job!
Cameron
2018-10-02 13:43:44 +0000 UTCWoah that was really good
Callum MacDonald
2018-10-02 12:22:36 +0000 UTC