Requesting Assistance
Added 2021-06-23 13:18:04 +0000 UTCI'm having a bit of a rough time with Gold Shot #4.
Not a technical issue, but more of a writer's block. I just can't find a way to make these 3 characters interact in a fun way. Or a least one that I'm happy with. Been trying a lot of things for the past week, to no avail. I swear, it's driving me crazy.
I'd like to request a bit of assistance from you, perhaps you can help me solve this riddle. Especially if you voted for this suggestion.
How would you have this play out ? While keeping in mind this is the starting point.
Let me know in the comments, I'm open to anything.
Comments
Aw, thank you for your concern. I can't help it ... every single piece I make matters a lot to me.
Renzuki Harai
2021-06-26 12:06:49 +0000 UTCRelax without tension
starchild
2021-06-25 18:04:17 +0000 UTCMaybe Tamaki could walk in and want what Kokoro's getting from Helena. So she sits down, takes Helena's hand away from Kokoro. Helena looks at Tamaki with that "What are you doing?" look. This leaves Kokoro looking a bit disappointed as Tamaki moves Helena's hand to her own crotch. Then to not leave Kokoro out, Tamaki licks her fingers and starts to finger Kokoro, causing her to get a bit surprised while reassuring the look of pleasure from before. Depending on the length of the video, Kokoro could feel like she needs to give back, so she reaches over with her right hand (givin the current position) to pleasure Helena. I'm less of a fan of Helena getting attention, sorry Helena fans. ;) But I'm liking this idea as well as many others above. I hope these help you out. ^^
Maikeru
2021-06-23 22:30:41 +0000 UTCHave a short scene of them tired after a volley ball game, lots of friendly gestures; layying heads on shoulders, maybe have them indirectly kiss through sharing a drink. You could have Kokoro be very aware of the drink being passed around (dramatic close-up of the can. Have her be the third to drink. Make Helena first to imply some sort of Alpha lol.) Transition to a group shower (panning shot!) and make sure Kokoro is still thinking about the drink (focus on her lips like she's wanting to be kissed). Have a few cuts of the other girls mouths being shown in turns flickering back and forth. Then finally cut to a shot of Kokoro sandwiched between the other two girls; Helena is in front kissing her aggressively while Tamaki has a hand on her breast and a hand between her legs. Abruptly cut to Kokoro snapping out of the daydream with Helena noticing. Have her approach the day dreamer; Tamaki follows. Show Kokoro being flustered and trying to not look at the other girls bodies (she's not doing a very good job). Tamaki and Helena look at each other as if ready for a plan of attack. Show a reluctant Kokoro. Fade and cut to a hotel room with a large bed (I imagine one of the rooms on the resort). I see these positions: A) Kokoro and Tamaki eating each other out while Helena watches; give her a doubled ended toy. B) Helena wearing the toy and thrusting it into Kokoro from behind; hair pulling... maybe spanking? C) Kokoro on her back as Tamaki pumps the toy into her while scissoring (since it's double ended). Have Helena bounce while squatting on her feet over Kokoro's mouth; hands on knees. Tamaki and Helena making very smug and triumphant eye contact. In part C I imagine Helena saying something about Kokoro wanting to be passed around like the can or wanting to drink from Helena like she WAS the can lol. This was a lot of fun to write, I hope it helps you out :) Thank you for reading!
SomePanda
2021-06-23 18:13:30 +0000 UTCAfter DoA6 Helena was left scared she would loose Kokoro, so Tamaki gets involved to get them together at an onsen. When the two sisters are in the bath a drunk Tamaki comes in and starts "playing" with Kokoro, then in order to protect her Helena distracts Tamaki by offering herself. (could carry on from there in a number of ways).
Liam Murphy
2021-06-23 17:56:41 +0000 UTCMaybe have Tamaki enter the room already naked. Helena smiles and Kokoro looks bashful, but curious. Cut to Tamaki going down on Kokoro while Helena fondles her chest.
YngStmr
2021-06-23 17:44:07 +0000 UTCTamaki is the aggressive type, kokoro is the goodie two shoe type, and Helena is the classy silent one I think. Maybe these setting will help to create a scenerio.
Arthur
2021-06-23 15:32:46 +0000 UTCAs we all know. Tamaki love being drunk so i think that, Tamaki appears behind Helena and plays with her breast and its Helena turn to be fingered or maybe start to Kiss Kokoro, and Helena to go down and lick Kokoro we all know.
Xasumi
2021-06-23 14:20:48 +0000 UTCTamaki could sneak behind Helena and surprise her with a breast squeeze. Kokoro takes this opportunity to go down on Helena as "revenge".
Ivo Robotnik
2021-06-23 13:52:00 +0000 UTCi suggest: Tamaki enter to the room with a harness and start fuck Kokoro meanwhile Helena play with Kokoro's nipples
Gerardo Ultraláser
2021-06-23 13:47:25 +0000 UTC
