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"Showing Improvement" (Ayane x Eliot series) - Discussion / Suggestions

Added 2018-10-25 23:59:04 +0000 UTC

The purpose of this thread is to gather feedback for my Ayane x Eliot series titled "Showing Improvement", as well as serving as a centralized place for general discussion about it, along with suggestions as the series progresses :

Here you can feel free to let me know how you're feeling/enjoying this series, and also provide suggestions if you want ! Share your thoughts with me regarding what you'd like to see happen in the upcoming pages. Things like ideas for dialog, situations, jokes ... anything ! I'll do my best to pick and add it as I keep working on the rest of the series, as much as humanly possible - for instance, I might not be able to put in stuff that's too silly, or if it conflicts with already established events.

Example of bad suggestions :

'Ayane is seduced by Brad and has sex with him in front of Eliot in the courtyard'

'Kasumi appears and cucks Ayane with Eliot'

I wouldn't be able to integrate any of these examples because they either imply a retcon of the beginning of the story, or go against the purpose of the series.

In other words, this is your chance to join me in the writing of the story for this series if you so wish !

Please note that merely suggesting an idea won't ensure it will make the final cut, however. But don't let that keep you from suggesting, as I'm pretty open minded overall.

Discuss, suggest, enjoy.