Game Release 18:09.2020
Added 2020-09-17 22:33:56 +0000 UTCI updated it a bit and created an itch.io page.
https://vincettiart.itch.io/old-software
So far responds from closed groups like this were almost zero...that means it's probably terrible. :D Please tell me what do i need to improve for future projects like this?
I honestly never played a visual novel before and don't have knowlege of making one. But oh well, it was a fun first experience. Im going back to continue drawing. Next picture will probably be one of Patreon Requests.
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Hi! Yeah my version of writing was absolutely terrible and eglish is not my first language. :D But yesterday my friend helped me with that - here is an update, please check it out: https://vincettiart.itch.io/old-software (also there is a new update coming very soon with more polishing)
Vince
2020-09-21 01:43:34 +0000 UTCI love it, I think it is very well done! My only real critique is that some of the writing feels off every now and then, but I suspect that's just due to English not being your first language, and I'm used to reading stuff like that. If you're ever looking for a proof-reader you can always message me on Twitter... xD
GrizzlyBearable
2020-09-21 01:39:13 +0000 UTCIf you want to find an example of a succesfull game made on Renpy, check Lustful Desires by Hyao - he’s got enough followers to prove it’s great. Visual novels with pure narrative are for girls, you need to give the guys some choices to create the illusion they are in control of the plot :)
Mikha Bruin
2020-09-19 05:59:45 +0000 UTCHaha thanks! But i checked it again and found more grammar mistakes/typos so there will be another update... :)
Vince
2020-09-18 04:07:00 +0000 UTCWell done, Vince. This was really well done, honestly. Look forward to more like it! Thanks for the content :)
Matthew
2020-09-18 04:01:01 +0000 UTCIm going to look up to how i can release it for android phones, because some people were asking that version.
Vince
2020-09-18 03:40:20 +0000 UTC
