Gym Surprise!
Added 2022-04-06 22:17:21 +0000 UTCThis is a remake of one of my first posts. This time I tried to create a better situation, dialogues and give it a better style.
What do you think of the new version? you think there was a good improvement? did you like the previous one better?
Comments
Really great work there Mr.Moudan!!! Should we be expecting a sequel on this piece of work?
BlackUniverse42
2022-04-09 05:22:27 +0000 UTCThat's what matters :D
2022-04-07 22:23:29 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie I don't remember the original but I do like this one, a lot!!
Anthar
2022-04-07 00:16:24 +0000 UTC
