The Goblins find the Doves
Added 2020-06-11 18:31:17 +0000 UTCTechnically page #2!
I like the rough look to this. Inking and colors done a little sloppy. Do you like this style?
It looks more natural to me.
Comments
Sarai certainly has easy access
Eddie Edwards
2020-06-12 16:50:25 +0000 UTCAh... who said it was a cave? This isn’t supposed to be a slapstick comic but I couldn’t help throwing that in. I’m sure in the final draft, the previous page will be drastically different.
Julia Sinope
2020-06-12 16:33:27 +0000 UTCIf the artificial, magical darkness has vanished - would then not the natural, normal darkness of the cave prevent the three from being seen like that - just like it hides most of the goblins from our eyes...? And the reaction seems a bit off - after the priestess exclaimed in detail that they hunt on hearing Sylvie should be kicking priestess butt while disclaimed "and bcause of you they found us...!!"
ConjurerDragon
2020-06-12 13:29:00 +0000 UTC
