The Fall of the Dragon Rangers - Part 1
Added 2021-06-05 09:47:28 +0000 UTCThe Dragon Rangers - a group of heroic young men who received power from a mysterious being called the Crystal Dragon. The brave Rangers risked their lives everyday to protect the city from monsters and villains.
All is well until one day, the Crystal Dragon sensed an ominous being draw near. A warning was given but alas it changed nothing, The fall of the Dragon Rangers start ...
Part 1 of the new original story - the Dragon Ranger is here. I decided to add text and dialogues to this set. I hope people will enjoy it. m(_ _)m
Also I am looking for people who can help me translate the story to Japanese/Chinese. If you think it's possible, please message me.
To get the HQ + Textless version, please send me a message
Comments
nice feedback.. yeah they try so hard to fight back, but still defeated or beaten at the end..
danrama
2021-06-07 14:47:37 +0000 UTCYeah, choked to death on huge dick! Great!
莱特Light
2021-06-07 07:02:55 +0000 UTCYour storytelling is improving again! Good concept! Can't wait to see the end of the other two Dragon Ranger! Silence hero always looks badass! How about a fight back when they get tortured or humiliated? While they almost success, they defeated again in an unexpected way. Still feel that Blue and Red get defeated too easily.
xiaogong
2021-06-06 17:47:25 +0000 UTCGreat scenes although I hope there are more sexual humiliation and these heroes deserve to be sex slaves for life. They got the easy way out. :) Red is my favorite. Was hoping to see him chained up in the same position that Blue was in.
2021-06-06 11:02:37 +0000 UTCThank you, before this I usually do textless renders so the viewers can add their own story to it. I may consider adding dialogue and text from now on though.
RaeRae
2021-06-05 18:48:44 +0000 UTCHmmmm, interesting idea, I will have to think about it, thanks though ;)
RaeRae
2021-06-05 18:48:05 +0000 UTCYou can write a story in the future about a Dragon Rangers who become undead monsters and help their villain master hunt down other heroes.
salome233
2021-06-05 14:39:11 +0000 UTCCan the villain enslave Dragon Rangers with undead spells? Let them simply die, that's boring, and let Dragon Rangers suffer under the villain forever, I think that's pretty cool, isn't it?
salome233
2021-06-05 14:33:06 +0000 UTCI love the idea that you add text and dialogue into your story! It makes your story even more tempting😍
SpicyDuck
2021-06-05 14:07:41 +0000 UTCI am glad you enjoyed the image and the story. And thank you for your suggest, it's a good idea and I will see what I can do.
RaeRae
2021-06-05 13:21:00 +0000 UTCThank you!
RaeRae
2021-06-05 13:20:03 +0000 UTCWell, It's a personal preferences I think because I enjoy seeing muscular heroes turn into a golden BBQ roasted. but I think you are right, I should consider other cooking methods too.
RaeRae
2021-06-05 13:19:56 +0000 UTCI love this idea, your ideas are really good and help me a lot, thank you!
RaeRae
2021-06-05 13:19:08 +0000 UTCnicely job author, i really love the workout scene at the begining, the text and dialogue make the story even hotter,can't wait to see the next part. Ouwh if I can make one request, i hope the the penis of our victim is not too oversized. A muscular hero with a small dick die by his villain is perfect humiliation.
danrama
2021-06-05 11:05:11 +0000 UTCYou always make barbecues out of them, could you consider tying the heroes up in hot water to make a stew?
salome233
2021-06-05 10:50:40 +0000 UTCGreat story!
JB
2021-06-05 10:31:02 +0000 UTCI hope the next one ends with the souls of the four heroes, imprisoned forever by the villains and enslaved forever
salome233
2021-06-05 10:23:44 +0000 UTC
