Hello, everyone, it has been a while since posted this story, The Coming over, and since I just reviewed it, today I'm reposting it with some corrections.
Besides some others I believe it's a fun story to also resume for this month, what do you think? :)
if you already read, I just did some slight change in some dialogues, but overall it's pretty much the same till where it stopped;
I hope you like it
Thank you!
BarrosBR
2021-03-03 17:24:09 +0000 UTCMihaluck
2021-03-03 06:06:08 +0000 UTC