Adding and sharing the progress, sorry any spelling mistake found. I'll try to correct it asap, after I reread it tomorrow, and also when post whole story hopefully. OH! justto let you know I don't mind when you point it out, hehe, on the contrary, it's totally appreciatted, but if you can't, no problemo, it's all good :) Meanwhile this is just to show you guys how it goes, Seems like it's gonna be bigger than NerBA, cause it already beated the mark of fifty panels. well that's it, thank you so much, everybody.