Chapter 10 Early Access (Tier 3)
Added 2023-02-14 17:53:56 +0000 UTCThe release is finally here, and with it, happy Valentine's Day 💖💖💖
Thank you all so much for pledging, it's incredibly appreciated!!
There was a lot of editing involved in this chapter regarding which scenes to include; I have close to 11k words worth of scenes that I wrote for CH10 initially, but scrapped and am saving for later moments. There simply wasn't the space for it this chapter.
That being said, this chapter still amounts to a total of 56k words, with the average playthrough being 34-42k words depending on player choices regarding personality, plot, and romance. So, as always, I far surpassed my word count estimates in the run up to this chapter.
You can see why I had to scrap some scenes lol
Some notable changes with this new chapter:
- The codex page for the Crescent Blades has been added, including character art! It should be unlocked for all saves that are past Chapter 1
- Changed various lore related names, mainly the ones referring to the Major Spirits, in order to better reference the Zoroastrian inspirations that Arsur's religion is based on
- Darkened the background color further to be friendlier on the eyes. Some day, I'll add a proper dark mode, but that day is not today haha
- Edited the Arsurian Calendar to match with the new background color, and also corrected the start and end dates of the months!
- IMPORTANT!!!: It's highly recommended to replay the entirety of CH9 before getting to CH10. CH9 has some changes relating to LI relationship stats, so if you don't go back to play through those, you risk relationship flavor text messing up in CH10 (high relationship described as a low relationship, etc).
You can discuss any spoilers freely on the Patreon Discord channels, or if you'd like to post about it on Tumblr don't forget to tag it as 'atoc spoilers' or 'ch10 spoilers' so that others won't be spoiled!!
Now, without further ado, here's the link for Chapter 10 💖
Comments
Thanks so much!! 💖💖 This was so fun to read, I'm really glad you enjoyed the new chapter!! 😊
cherry
2023-02-16 16:12:18 +0000 UTCYooo that chapter had EVERYTHING! The lore <3 was so ✨️tasty✨️ (when that codex update its <3 joy) So heres my thoughts in absolutely no order ever: The way X roasted that poor farmer was so unecessary but u gotta admit it was funny as hell I was like 👀☕️ Love love love how you writes fights and make them feel soo cool. Just over there, Hearteyes at the LIs...... I cant believe you're gonna make me do a route where i have t ??? prioritise the nobles ? (Ew) The fact both R and A look back at the crown after their lil duel to make sure the crown is looking if you're romancing them i 💕 The way if u have a high relationship with D they just "my letter" D love of my life can you please have some priority im begging you im dying over here 😭🥹 (but also the symbolism of D putting the letter close to their heart beneath the armor cause they knew it would be the safest and the letter getting destroyed is * chief kiss*) The way A trust the crown enough to tell them about the sister I 😭 (also the angst of that storyline is gonna be so good im 💞💞) The crown kicking ass for once. Look at my baby so proud 🥹. Idk the banter of it all, how the crown roast X handwriting, training with the guards, Yekbûn & Perjin teasing R & the crown, just A being the funniest mf in Asur, When D talks with Nima and theres that moment when they're like "they no longer see Asur" that passage was so beautiful oh my god I absolutely adore the variations in the letters and how it was written generally because we can tell the crown gave a lot of thoughts to these. THE HAND HOLDING IN A ROUTE. THE KISSES IN R ONE. THE VARIATION BETWEEN SHY AND FLIRTY CROWN. SCREAMING. NO ONE TOUCHES ME. ILL NEVER BE THE SAME. IT REWROTES MY DNA Its insane how every chapter i cant chose a favorite Lis ???? They're all so 💕💕💕💕💕 THE CLIFFHANGERS ??? Shooketh. The angst next chapter is gonna be so fucking tasty im so here for it Although the real star of the chapter, and lets be honest here, was the garden size lady 💀 ANYWAY THIS CHAPTER IN SHORT WAS THAT GAGA GIF: talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before Thank you so much for writing Atoc and sharing it with us its a real blessing 🥹
Lagawara
2023-02-15 18:12:22 +0000 UTCHurrah!
J. Zed
2023-02-14 17:58:37 +0000 UTC