October Short Story - Mass Effect: Final Error
Added 2022-10-23 18:58:25 +0000 UTCAlright! Finally got this done more or less to my satisfaction. The hangup came with an intended sex scene, frustratingly enough. No matter what I did with it, it felt like it broke the flow of the whole story. Eventually, I ended up mostly scrapping it in favor of a fade-to-black style of scene. Unfortunate, since it means there's only one real sex scene in this entry. But I just couldn't make it work in a way that didn't feel disruptive. Don't worry, though, if you happen to be a fan of her (It'll be pretty obvious who I mean, I think!). I fully intend to have the person in question appear in additional sex scenes later.
For now, I give you the next entry of Mass Effect: Final Error. Interlude 2. Of probably 3 interludes -_-. I originally intended for it to be only two in total. But with this one running over 6,500 words without covering everything I wanted to, I think a third interlude is called for. And then we'll be on to the much-altered events of Mass Effect 3...
As usual, the story is attached as a PDF. Enjoy! Hopefully!