Chapter 4 Page 42 SKETCH
Added 2018-10-17 01:06:25 +0000 UTCHere we are, folks: the final page of chapter 4!
Fun fact: 41 was originally going to be the final page of the chapter, where it ends with Donovan and Ramirez holding the knife, but I started having second thoughts on it for 2 reasons: 1. It didn't really feel like it was a proper ending for the chapter because it didn't really have some sort of "payoff/money shot", and 2. Karolyne told me I wrote a bit too much dialogue for that page, so I decided to try and put the latter half of said dialogue into another page, and mix it with the "payoff/money shot" you see here.
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Thanks! Yeah, the sky's the limit on what chapter 5 will be. ;)
2018-10-17 03:42:59 +0000 UTCOooh nice, now thats a hook in for the next chapter, cant wait!
OlemateKeith
2018-10-17 01:51:12 +0000 UTC
