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3/12

I plan to go to the hospital again tomorrow because of the poor recovery status ......

Today in continue to draw those unique strange gum beasts!

In fact, inwardly quite resistant to write puro dialogue, because I do not know how to show such complex emotions, each time to write dialogue, I have to repeatedly read many times in person, to ensure that it is not too awkward, and not too straightforward!

 In addition, please those who have not yet won the prize, and sponsored more than 500 or so old users, if you want to appear here, please send me a message ~

因为恢复状况不佳,明天打算再去一次医院……

今天在继续绘制那些独特的奇怪胶兽!

其实内心蛮抗拒去编写puro的对话的,因为我不知道怎么表现出那么复杂的情感,每一次写对话,我都要反复亲自读好多遍,保证不会太尴尬,也不会太直白!

 另外,请那些还未中过奖,而且赞助超过500左右的老用户,如果你要想出现在这里,请给我发消息吧~

3/12

Comments

great ^ ^

Snow Dragon

I think that Dr. K's conversation was quite mean! I think it helps fuel the doubt the player has in trusting him since we have been insulted and made a mockery of for quite a while before getting to know his true motives. Almost the moment we woke up in the Warehouse all the way up to the Greenhouse, Dr. K has been unforgiving with his cruel words, the buzz of his monitors and speakers no doubt gives the player anger, and you have done a great job writing that meanness as a front for Dr. K's insecurities, as well as his secret desire to see you succeed in spite of it all. His meanness is a great motivator to keep the player going forward, just to spite him!~ Just as Dr. K intended! :3

JNY4

Yeah, I mean the Doctor has always come off as a bit of a prick, so I would say so. Puro was more trying to ignore him.

Paul

No problem 🥰

Halvor

I don't value my body too much and this has led to the current result, I am more focused on what I create, this may be related to my obsession, I want people to see my efforts

Snow Dragon

Thank you, so ...... do you think Dr. K's conversation was mean enough? Haha, I kinda want to anger the players

Snow Dragon

Thank you, so is the conversation at ......K Dr. mean enough?

Snow Dragon

I can understand what you mean~

Snow Dragon

thanks~

Snow Dragon

谢谢你的祝福😘

Snow Dragon

thank you!

Snow Dragon

Your conditions are met, please send me a message

Snow Dragon

Please take care of yourself.

Nella

^ ^ thanks

Snow Dragon

thank you and wish you too~

Snow Dragon

Thank you, there are always opportunities

Snow Dragon

No, thank you, it was quite difficult, but I'm quite happy to finish writing a whole dialogue

Snow Dragon

wow, this has been a long time, although you are still a little short of 500 ... but I can think about it

Snow Dragon

同志你也辛苦啦

Snow Dragon

Don't be discouraged, there is always a chance

Snow Dragon

thanks~

Snow Dragon

Not enough ......

Snow Dragon

Didn't go today sorry...

Snow Dragon

Thank you, but my recovery is too slow, my body is really too bad

Snow Dragon

thanks!

Snow Dragon

thanks~

Snow Dragon

I hope you feel better soon, friend! Stress is such an awful thing... please take care! As for Puro, I think it's good that his dialogue is a little strange - thus far you have written him pretty well, as he is compelling in motive and a little overbearing with his excitement (which is a good thing for his character, since he has had nobody to talk with up until Colin). I'm sure that Puro's dialogue will continue to read just fine, and I respect the amount of effort you put into it!~

JNY4

Nothing wrong with prioritizing your own health! Hope you feel better soon. As for Puro's dialogue, honestly, I feel like awkward/straightforward dialogue fits him better than you would think, he has never spoken to anyone before, so him being a bit awkward/straightforward would make sense.

Paul

I hope the visit goes well. If you feel that the dialogue is awkward, I don’t know if you mean it doesn’t come across correctly or if you mean the English translation sounds weird, but you can always ask for help.

SeedyB

Please rest up! Take care of yourself!

CyanCelestial

健康比什么都重要,祝早日恢复w

Leopold

I hope everything will be fine for your health

kuroson

I Would Ask To Appear But I'd Rather For You To Get Healthy First Thing First Hope You Recover Quickly!

FunkyPenguin

Okay hope u get better and don't push your self much!

JAgaiMOSANG

Wish you a healthy and speedy recovery.

AbundantCloud37

I have always wanted to appear and that is why I support you with a lot of money, but even after appearing in the game, I would continue to support you with the maximum level, DragonSnow!

BGamingMisterL 24

Do you need help writing Puro's dialogue? I'd love to offer advice and suggestions, if you wouldnt mind

Shiny Umbreon

I've been sponsoring for awhile, but I honestly didn't know about the patreon for a long time. I'm not sure if I am eligible for "old patreon" status. I've only had 14 months on Thunder Science tier?

Skipa

辛苦了!

O w O

Amazing! I hope everything goes alright for you. I would LOVE to appear in there.

SeafoamWolf

Don't push your self too hard, I hope you're recovery gets better.

HunterX

it is possible that I appear in it ? 👀🥰

Halvor

Looks amazing but please keep safe at the hospital. I hope you make a good recovery!

Nella

I hope you get better soon. Take care now.

Kahuna

Looks amazing and would love to show up here

Aziz_nightwalker

Looks good, wow

LmaoWhoAreU


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