XaiJu
DragonSnow
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10/8

Rewriting the plot dialogue and adding new actions is time consuming and I'm really bad at writing

The translation will probably be submitted tomorrow ......

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10/8

Comments

Papa Wolf to the rescue.

dieseldragons

OMG I love it!!

Tyler Bequeaith

Great new scene! Also don't be so hard on yourself, you're a pretty good writer, prolly better than a lot of us lol. Keep up the great work lad

Hugs

Hey I like this new Improvement scene with Animations Nice I like it alot Keep it up!

Thorne Borg

I don't think you are bad at writing. The story and dialogue in the original changed really captured my heart. It was so charming at times, and funny at times, and truly heart breaking when it needed to be.

Renny Rabbit

As always I adore how much more expressive the game is looking~ Amazing job~

JNY4

è¶…å¯æ„›~

空幻

"Shoo! Bad latex pup, stay away from human!" Puro's just too precious lol

ZekromPlayer

This scene reminds me of a part of a video called Underpants (Pacifist Route) by Sr. Pelo. Puro be like “DONT TOUCH THE CHILD!!!†It’s so hilarious

Clark Cox

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简简å•å•就好

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ObuRibion

You made me laugh a bunch of times! And your straightforward dialogue is easy to understand and follow along with, so I appreciate it!

Shiny Umbreon

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Dunk

There will be more after that!

Snow Dragon

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Snow Dragon

he always

Snow Dragon

I wish as well !

Dunk

My "dialogue" is too straightforward and humorless

Snow Dragon

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Dunk

I haven't updated for two days this week, I can't forgive myself, but you're right, I wish I could take seven days off a week (haha)

Snow Dragon

好,明天一鼓作气åšå¥½ï¼

Snow Dragon

Puro new animation look so cute â¤ï¸

JAgaiMOSANG

(奇怪的关注点警告)有一说一,兽屋大大的更新时间总让我感觉ä¸åœ¨åŒ—京时间啊……是审核或时区原因还是åˆåœ¨ä¸é¡¾æ­£å¸¸ä½œæ¯çˆ†è‚了?o(´^ï½€)o

GreyTiger

He's so adorable

TheBaconTrain

Why do you think you are bad at writing? The story you told in Changed is awesome, and in Changed Special it only got even better

Shiny Umbreon

I feel you great at writing. Also remmber to take break once in a while don't work all day.

Vulpes Designs

加油~

lostmet


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