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Chapter no.100 When Chakra Meets Magic

The heat of the bonfire washed over him, carryi

Chapter no.100 When Chakra Meets Magic

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Which leads me to a suggestion (If it's inconvenient for you, just disregard). Would it be difficult to divide these chapters up? I just came from Scribble Hub and even the chapter size there was overwhelming! I would have three or four things I would want to talk about during the chapter, but by then end I have forgotten about them (maybe this is just a me problem). If I took the time to write down my thoughts on a piece of paper or google document while I read each chapter, then I think I could engage how I want to. Maybe I will do that....but I think many others have the same difficulty. Ever 1.5k-2.5k worlds, find a spot to post a chapter (ie. Chapter 103.1, chapter 103.2, etc) and then you could have a Q&A that pertains to each part of the chapter. Any who! Cheers!

Brian

I don't know how you do this. I love all the novelty, but reading this makes me wonder how you would make the original content better by itself. For example, you talked about the unexplored Uzumaki line from a chapter ago. What you did with them is so amazing! Just adding that change into the original is enough for an entirely different story! You have so much in every chapter that it's overwhelming! I love your mind!

Brian

Ok all I ask if for Naruto to do some grinding for souls 85% of me loves the pacing as well as the richness of your story but the rest of me wants number go up brrrrrrrrrr

Phantom knight who can’t think of a better nicknam

Can't wait for the next chapter! TFTC!

BigMann

Laurentius. His time approaches. I remember commenting this at some point in the past, but Laurentius’s line of “a pyromancer must be in tune with nature” makes me think about a potential combination or alternative to sage mode later on. Either way, the boy will become a character soon and that is good.

Sawyer Newton

Hope he doesn't forget his gardening project :P

Rhydec

Huh, I was expecting more Konoha shenanigans, but I am not at all upset by a nice deviation into more Lordran. Anastacia is a sweetheart as always and Dusk is rapidly growing on me. That said, this boy's love-life is going to be an absolute shit-show.

MehOhWell

I am most pleased indeed

Kurotanbo

So a thought occurs would Dusk be able to help teach Naruto about politics since she is a princess and all

David Owens

This chapter was great. Can't wait for more

Altrafry Golden

This chapter is great

Axwl

Me like

David Owens


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