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Chapter no.99 Keep your Friends Close and your Enemies Closer

The smell of food drifted through the air. Naru

Chapter no.99 Keep your Friends Close and your Enemies Closer

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Also, Naruto is now 6'2" only a little smaller than the Pervy Sage. I'm thinking about his fully grown size at 16'.....and I'm not seeing any girls in the Naruto verse being able to handle that, if you get my meaning. Unless she's an Akimichi clan girl...so which deity will that leave him with πŸ€” Unless he will be able to control his height. Maybe that is an innate dragon ability.

Brian

Man. You had me nearly in tears at work and then again driving home. Love the way you did the Jiraiya bit. No explosions, just honesty. Danzo just became relevant again, great angle. Brilliant.

Brian

Finally read the chapter; amazing, while I like Naruto and grew up with the show, this really elevates it. I really like how smart and careful Naruto is being, he can't just call out Danzo on his BS, because his heritage is being held hostage, so he has to actually do counterintelligence... Like an actual ninja. My favorite part of Naruto was the early episodes, where it was more about clever tactics rather than who's a better ninja wizard. This whole story, has consistently delivered on that

Jar Jar Bingus

I'm currently saving up chapters, so I haven't read this one yet; I use the heart/like to track where I'm at. Thank you for the chapter!

Jar Jar Bingus

Thanks for the chapter. I love that Naruto can see right through Danzo and is basically trolling him. The wind blade technique is pretty cool and I like the suggestions you had for it. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I am curious on what the rest of the Naruto’s generation are doing. Rock Lee, Ino, Tenten, Shino, Kaiba, Shikamary, and Choji. Curious on what their reactions were when the news about Naruto’s heritage came out. Especially Ino and Tenten since those two were hanging out with Naruto a lot more before the wave mission.

Natural

Tftc

travis btmb

Ashura is. The culminating experience of his previous incarnations. That, or the SO6P. Existing outside time and space can be a bit boring, so it's a hobby.

Kurotanbo

Jiraiya: A senile toad gave a prophecy about SaViOr Of Da WoRlD.... (later)... now that prophecy may not come true after all, but now we have DrAgOnS instead....... lol, this is why I think the character's pathetic. Constantly believing in far-fetched prophecies, like some religious fanatic. As for canon Naruto's lack of techniques, I wonder what it says about Jiraiya himself - that he was unable to teach anything more.

pra86

Listen all the other parts and everything was cool and all, my respects! BUT THAT CASTLE IDEA PLSS MAKE IT HAPPEN

nble1

There is nothing more freaky than altering memories, Danzo is such a interesting character when he’s done right. Truly a fantastic chapter

DavyJones

awesome. Thanks again for the update πŸ˜ƒ!

Oscar Mendoza-Vazquez

Thank god. I was getting twitchy at the lack of a new chapter. And this was honestly great. I kinda figured Danzo was just bullshitting or had raided Uzu for Uzumaki techniques, but having taken it directly from what should have been Naruto's home? That's gonna piss our boy off. Also, I can't wait for interactions with the rest of the Konoha natives. Iruka (even though he really doesn't feel like much of a presence at this stage), Ino, Tenten even Konohamaru. I feel like we have at least two more chapters of catching up with people before the plot ensues once more. Either way, thanks for the chapter. 5 more plz.

MehOhWell

Idk.

Muhammad Hasnain

Oh I finally thought of a question who is writing the item description like don't get me wrong they are awesome but is it just the system itself or is something else writing them

David Owens

So first I REALLY loved the interaction between Naruto and Jiraiya. It was so cute and when it got to the serious parts it felt like two real people talking not two characters following a script. Another part i loved was how accepting Jiraiya was about Naruto refusing to stop going to Lordan he clearly doesn't like it but is being smart and not trying to force Naruto in to doing what he thinks is best

David Owens

I’m not gonna lie, when jiraija said to Naruto stop going to lodran, I wanted to smash his face into pulp, what fucking right does he have to tell Naruto that, he didn’t even knew Naruto in the first place, it sounds like to me that perverted sage is overstepping his bounds

Geovanni Otero

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