Chapter no.97 The Hyuga Clan's Healing
Added 2025-08-03 18:59:12 +0000 UTCA few days before Team 7 returned to Konoha, Te
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You are so thoughtful with your work, and then you explain at the end. I love this.
Brian
2025-10-03 22:20:29 +0000 UTCtftc
travis btmb
2025-08-24 05:58:31 +0000 UTCAmazing
Jar Jar Bingus
2025-08-06 02:08:54 +0000 UTCloved the OPM reference!
HeadpatsOnly
2025-08-05 08:33:56 +0000 UTCMan, we really gotta up Kakashi n' Sasuke's weird factor, cuz how the hell did THEY come outta that mission as the normal ones on team 7? Naruto does Naruto things, Sakura is apparently possessing herself... Sasuke got a sword. Must feel weird being the normal one suddenly. Like, his trauma did not prepare him to be the sanity standard, lol. Yes I know his eyes was upgraded, but bare with me.
Kurotanbo
2025-08-04 10:12:45 +0000 UTCSo like a Jojo stand?
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-04 10:07:08 +0000 UTCI have an idea for Sakura's summon: Inner Sakura. Due to a sealing mishap and Naruto/Lorraine Fuckery, Sakura somehow Summons Inner Sakura.
Kurotanbo
2025-08-04 09:59:35 +0000 UTCAwesome 👍
Oscar Mendoza-Vazquez
2025-08-04 05:38:29 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter, love what you are doing with both Naruto and dark souls lore, since darks souls lore is mostly vague, and Naruto lore is like cheese with the amount of plotholes, or unresolved/ unexplained things
FrikandelSpeciaal
2025-08-04 00:08:46 +0000 UTCLove the insight into Hisashi this chapter. A question will we be getting characters in this fic that were ds2 and ds3 that would exist in the ds1 time frame. Naruto could use an uncle figure and Gael should be around I feel like they could have a cool dynamic.
GoT779
2025-08-03 23:46:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Love the ideas on the gentle fist. Although, I don’t think Hinata’s gentle fist is “gentle” with that hornet ring, based on Hiashi’s description.
Jacob
2025-08-03 21:53:23 +0000 UTC1. We know that in canon Naruto, you can technically study the bodies of others to find out their secrets, so the elders would’ve had Hinata’s eyes taken to be studied to see if this unique mutation can be replicated. And since the Hyuga elders see Hinata as worthless as she hasn’t shown them her strength, but Hiashi shot that down. And if he didn’t, Naruto would’ve personally hunted the elder council. You think anyone is going to stop him? Naruto can literally use the Red Eye Orb and trap the elders in pocket dimensions and kill them, no one will ever know. 2. I think the Hyuga would have some unique customs. I think I'll show them off in the next chapter. The customs are that the Hyuga love to make fermented mare's milk, and even if you don't want to drink it, a simple sip is enough to be seen as respectful. Guests are seen off with a cup of tea. 3. Naruto gave her a crossbow. Remember how Hinata told Naruto that the Hyuga stopped using bows because they aren’t good in ninja combat close quarters? Naruto just gave her a crossbow to combat that, bow for long-range while crossbow for mid to short. 4. My favourite scenes to write are anything that involves lore and worldbuilding. Other than that, I would agree writing emotional scenes are fun. 5. Hard to say. There isn’t like one episode that comes to mind. Most of the chapters, I had some degree of fun, so it’s hard to say. 6. I will add more bonding moments between Team 7. You remember how when Sakura was training, her mother asked for her to bring Team 7 over for dinner? Well, we can add that. We can add one of the Team 7 members having a birthday. There’s also the fact that Kakashi owes Naruto 3 new jutsu, so we can add that. Oh yeah, then there's the whole "what happens to the 2nd Hokage’s Thunder Sword?" Does Sasuke get it? What about Aoi’s umbrella that shoots senbons, who gets it? When Naruto moves back to his parents’ home, how does Team 7 help, etc. etc.? Your request will definitely be fulfilled.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 21:25:16 +0000 UTCOk question time most of these are just idle curiosities so they don't really matter 1 what did the elders originally want to do with Hinata's new eyes I assume it was messed up but we'll curiosity killed the cat 2 do you think the hyuga would have unique customs for hospitality if so what would they be 3 where did hinata get a cross bow I thought she only had a bow 4 last chapter I ask about your favorite character to write and now I ask about your favorite type of scene to write is it a badass battle a sorrowful tragedy maybe wholesome bonding moments (my money is on the wholesome bonding moments) 5 in that same vain what has been your favorite chapter in this stroy to write so far 6 ok this is less of a question and more a request can we have more team 7 bonding moments they are my third favorite part of this stroy Ps once more this is a great stroy
David Owens
2025-08-03 20:57:14 +0000 UTCGlad you liked the chapter! Feel free to hit me with any questions once you've had time to process everything. As for the apology, honestly, I don’t even remember what you said, so no worries at all. You really don’t have to apologize. I’m not the type to get offended easily, unless someone’s outright dismissing the work I’ve put into this. If it was story critique or just general feedback, I always take that in good faith and use it to improve. So we're all good!
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 20:42:34 +0000 UTCThis and the previous chapter have shown how Lordran changed Naruto and his acquaintances.
Axwl
2025-08-03 20:39:56 +0000 UTCA great chapter as always i will ask my question once I finish processing the chapter Ps I once more want to apologize for what I said in the... OK I have no idea what the name of that is so I'm gonna call it the chat sorry for what I said there
David Owens
2025-08-03 20:38:56 +0000 UTCIt is canon to a certain extent. The canon is that hinata used to be the hier but Hanabi was being trained by hiashi to be the next hier. That's about it. We never really get more information about this in the manga. There is anime filler but that's also non canon. I tried to make something that would make sense given the limited information.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 20:24:01 +0000 UTCIs what you described re: Hyuga Hinata/Hanabi inheritance /not/ canon? I thought that was always the case?
thevolunteer
2025-08-03 20:21:04 +0000 UTCMe 2
Vick
2025-08-03 20:16:55 +0000 UTCAlso, the council shitting their pants at the idea of so many villages in the chunin exams. Like do we allow our kids to go into the death machine of thr chunin exams or not.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 19:25:46 +0000 UTCHe does not. It will be explored in the next chapter.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 19:24:26 +0000 UTCWell, in my opinion, I’ve tried to stay logically consistent with the characters. We’re nearly half a million words into the story, and a lot of emotional development has already happened across massive arcs. I think it might feel like there’s an ebb in intensity because each chapter lately has carried its own emotional weight in different ways. Take Naruto’s confrontation with Hiruzen, for example in earlier arcs, he might’ve shouted or lost control. But after everything he’s been through in the Wave arc and Uzushiogakure, he’s grown. So instead of blowing up, he stays calm, demands answers, and lets the emotion come through in brief but powerful moments. That kind of restraint is part of how I’ve shown his maturity. That said, I’m definitely open to critique. How would you suggest I amp up the emotional intensity without sacrificing the growth the characters have earned?
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-08-03 19:23:53 +0000 UTCDem feels tho…. Excellent chapter. I’m now wholeheartedly hoping for a council meeting POV where Hiruzen has to explain all of this to the powers that be. The sheer WTF factor to it all would be hilarious.
MehOhWell
2025-08-03 19:23:46 +0000 UTCNoice. Does Naruto know about his bingo book entry yet?
JustAFan
2025-08-03 19:19:18 +0000 UTCPersonally, I find the interpersonal relations in the last couple of chapters pretty lackluster. There seems to be a real ebb in the intensity of emotions
Ausie Brooks
2025-08-03 19:16:42 +0000 UTCMe like
David Owens
2025-08-03 19:00:01 +0000 UTC
