Jessica and Holli, page 1
Added 2017-05-03 13:25:52 +0000 UTCHello gents!
First page is up. There isn't a lot of action in this one but we need to have a little build up after all. I'm going to post a poll after this post where you can vote for the some alternatives for next page.
I'm going to start sketching on the next page tonight probably, I would like to get it up if possibly next Wednesday already to get the comic going, but it all depends on how complex it turns out and so on, I am however keeping the shading a little simpler and I think that might work well for a comic.
That's all for now, I'm going to make a post with a poll in it, stay awesome!
Shiin
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Comments
Cool name for the MC ;)
2017-05-06 19:10:40 +0000 UTCI agree, can't jump right into it always : )
Shiin
2017-05-03 18:18:46 +0000 UTChopefully you will like it : )
Shiin
2017-05-03 18:18:25 +0000 UTChm yeah, i think you were right, i changed it up a little!
Shiin
2017-05-03 18:18:06 +0000 UTCAlriiight, here we go. Nice start, last panel is very promising, but Holli's face looks really weird? Something's definitely off there. I quite like Karl's poster, fun detail XD Stay cool Shiin :)
Smutfan
2017-05-03 18:01:16 +0000 UTCoops! thanks for the headsup, fixed it and attached a highres version!
Shiin
2017-05-03 16:42:12 +0000 UTCYou didn't attach the pic to view it
slimes
2017-05-03 16:22:39 +0000 UTCThis looks very promising
Jay Dot
2017-05-03 13:31:08 +0000 UTCIts ok,we needed a plot framework and us cool to have some kind of pacing before the action, the girls look good on your style so nice job ^^
Ace
2017-05-03 13:28:21 +0000 UTC
