page 11!
Added 2016-03-09 13:59:50 +0000 UTCHello gents!
page 11 is up, I feel we are only half way there yet but we shall see, possible longest comic yet? time will tell! but around 20 pages take or give one seems likely.
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Second picture of dexters mom on friday, nothing much more to add, stay awesome!
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Comments
That would help, but I did like the starting position better personally.
Dantels
2016-03-12 12:04:09 +0000 UTCyeah you are correct, I wanted to keep the pacing up a bit but I agree that could look strange, I added a small text thing saying 'a moment later' in there, perhaps that will make things a little less confusing!
Shiin
2016-03-12 10:46:24 +0000 UTCDid she switch from laying on her back to laying on her stomach without a transition or am I crazy?
Dantels
2016-03-12 07:48:15 +0000 UTCthank you, well I'm working on the second dexters mom pic atm, we shall see how many pictures it will be!
Shiin
2016-03-10 12:34:33 +0000 UTCHehe well it might be ^^ I kinda like how this page came out, yeah I could have made more panels where she turns out etc but I just wanted the pace to be a little higher then that : ) I keep doing things like these when i write text, I probably get distracted but podcasts and stuff like that when i change text and things like that, i usually change the sentences a couple of times : ) I fixed it now to only one 'to' : )
Shiin
2016-03-10 12:32:40 +0000 UTChehe well probably :D I don't know but it seems to me we shall end up around that number ^^
Shiin
2016-03-10 12:27:26 +0000 UTCIt's good to see Wednesday adventure and ichigo orihime, although Orihime think the end this serca will be a little wrong, and uqe will have more action in 20 pages and becomes increasingly more difficult. Hopefully the breast of dexter upgrade, and want to see that fat ass in action with that dealer. =D
2016-03-10 00:42:06 +0000 UTCAh, a correction, the third panel has 2 "to"s, should fix that.Great page man, stay awesome :)
Smutfan
2016-03-09 14:54:43 +0000 UTCIf this does become the longest comic, well, I just think that would be wonderful! And speaking of wonderful, those first two panels are good stuff, and I love her silly expression in the third panel (along with those huge tits)! Fourth one is wonderful, a great angle for showing off that fat ass. I wonder how he flipped her over when it was so hard to get inside her, maybe she's adjusting at last. Wonderful page Shiin, can't wait to see what you do with this next and what else you have in the future for us, stay awesome man :D!!
Smutfan
2016-03-09 14:02:26 +0000 UTCWow! You bright my day, 20 pages of this one? Its worth it, yes it is. Great job Shiin, looking forward what you have in store for this one. Stay awesome and thanks
Ace
2016-03-09 14:01:56 +0000 UTC
