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bleach comic

Hello gents

A simple title for a simple comic, or something like that. Check out the first 3 pages, lets start this and see where it goes. I couldn't sleep so I got up early to finish this up so spelling misstakes and anything in general that might be wrong i blame on a lack of sleep ^^ If anythings of I'll correct it later! Trully complex story in this one : )

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Nothing much to add, time for a nap soon i think, and hopefully my lineart isn't to bad, I feel rusty and stuff.  Well anyway, Stay awesome!

/shiin

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Thanks, i figured we didn't need to make it to complex but I am glad people like it, and no I don't think she planed for any of this but she decided to roll with it : )

Shiin

thank you, well the story is about as deep as it needs to be in this one : )

Shiin

Thanks you, well glad you like it ^^ I will look into the spelling thing, thanks : ) Well yeah let's see where we can take this!

Shiin

thanks, yeah I didn't draw it out very much, straight into the action : )

Shiin

A simple title for a great comic, and well here the first 3 pages can see how much we worked hard to make history Start with all his might, just see the first three pages and I realize I have a good beginning and a good ending. We can see how wonderful orihime schoolgirl dressed in looks and also we can appreciate as currently wears, perhaps ichigo a snake between her legs? it seems that the snake ichigo has between her legs is about to bite the greasy ass Orihime certainly orihime never thought the boy she liked would have a big thing in his pants wallowing and hoping they make a good prey to hunt , Ichigo's cock looks like a flower that grows as you are throwing water. After so long without seeing Ichigo in action, now we will see again in action with orihime but this time his cock is twice as large as this, now that wore the suit shinigami and no tight pants. Ichigo and Orihime will be the new Naruto and Hinata, well these two we will leave alone that start with his new adventure. Now the Wednesday of happiness were transformed with this comic bleach and good to wait on Wednesday again we see another chapter of bleach in action. =D

I'm digging the story so far, keep up the good work!

Gerald E

Ooooooh man, what an awesome start:D!! Orihime's bod is amazing, those're some of the biggest tits you've drawn and her ass is looking fantastically fat on the third page, especially in the last panel! In fact, that last panel is just totally amazing :D Lapdance action is too nice. Only spelling corrections are that Orihime should be saying "I've never seen" on the second page and on the last page she should be saying "Oh wow" and a space between forward and but. I had high expectations for this and you've more than matched them, amazing stuff Shiin, I can't wait to see this update each week :D! Get a great sleep man, stay so totally awesome dude :D

Smutfan

Looking pretty good, hands on action, not feel pressured to put a title, see how the comic flaws and you can name it afterwards, for now after school fun could work, your Orihime is awesome and I like a lot how this is starting. ^^

Ace


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