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Magical Girl & Chocolate (Akatsuki)

I did something a little different this time: I added a little bit of a "story" to the video. Let me know if you liked it or if you thought it was a bit too much!

Akatsuki, of course, we can never get enough of!

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Magical Girl & Chocolate (Akatsuki)

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Yes... sweat... of course... And I'll keep that in mind! I've heard varying reactions to it so if, in the future, I do the "story thing," I'll likely post a version with and a version without the story.

Squirreltail Animation

Wow, she really worked up a... sweat. So much it was dripping off her. And she's just a little squirt ain't she? I like that more please! lol. One more thing. Story and crowd reactions (as long as they are not too loud) always makes it better.

RevyTwoHand

I meant her gasping voice, but please don't worry about it, I don't want you to put in more work because of it, so please go with what you like. In the end, it was just my personal opinion! I didn’t used to like covers of vocaloid songs in MMD videos before, but after watching your videos for years now, they’ve have grown on me XD

mikau

Fair point fair point. I didn't think of the "crowd surprised cheering" thought process. I will have to do that sort of thing next time! Also, which voice do you mean? Do you mean the "gasping for air," or the actual singing? I admit I actually like the singing voice! 😅 As for the gasping for air, I also admit I just found the first version of gasping for air that wasn't awful and went with it. I'll do more searching next time!

Squirreltail Animation

Noooo... poor Akatsuki! Here, let me hug her to shield her from the prying eyes. 😉

Squirreltail Animation

As I suspect you know, I did end up uploading a separate video file without the "extra vfx" attached to it. In the future, I might post both versions, because while I know some like to know the story behind it, I also know after the first time, most people just want to focus on the important parts! 😉

Squirreltail Animation

Akatsuki tries to be a brave girl, but deep down she's still a super shy little cutie!

Squirreltail Animation

I always like erotic MMD style videos where there's story on them. I truly believe that adding a story greatly enhances the potential to arouse the viewer, so I would love it if you made more videos in this style! Another personal opinion is that I would have liked it more if the audience had more interaction with Akatsuki-chan. For example, whenever she reached a new level of exhaustion, I would have loved hear the crowd react (I definitely would if I were there! 😆) I also wasn't a fan of the voice you gave to her, she sounded like an old lady! XD So if you can't find a voice that suits her well, I think it'd be fine if you make her mute. Overall, the video was really good! I also learned a few things that I might use for future works, so thank you for that! (Forget the footage, that sounds 'MEGA' familiar... 😆!)

mikau

Magical girl Akatsuki so cute but the twist is she thinks she successfully cast that last spell but what really happened was she passed out naked infront of all those fans and many pics were taken. <3

Viper 7

I really like having a backstory to the videos, but for me personally it's more about just knowing what the story is and not so important exactly how it's delivered. So i'd be just as happy seeing this intro in text-form in the post to set the mood, especially considering the extra workload to add it into a video. ❤ If you keep the video intro style, i'd love to have it as a separate video file from the music dance part so i can keep loop-enjoying the dance. 😁 But i also do have ffmpeg installed, so if my demands are not met (or it's just more work for you), i _could_ be taking matters into my own hands! 😉

TheYvian

Akatsuki dealing with the situation like a champ. And i absolutely love the ending scene as she runs off, too damn cute!

TheYvian


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