John and Elizabeth
Added 2014-10-03 23:20:29 +0000 UTCOkay guys! Hope you got the comics send out to you, Feel free to give feedback here and what you think. I'm learning as I go along, how i want to sketch and stuff, and yeah. Some experimentation in this one. Page 5 still hasnt gotten any text, but the ideas is that she drops her towel by misstake (obviously not really a missake) and tells john its only fair that since she showed him, he has to show her. Next page will be the first action page, probably, I know I said last month I would try to send out another page during the month, but didn't get around to it >_< Ah well, I might be able to this month, but no promises! Takes a bit longer then I thought it would, got only myself to blame ^^ If you have any ideas for how the comics will procedd, feel free to make those suggestions to, I'm looking more for ideas like, someone walk in, john slips on something, elizabeth gets stuck somewhere etc etc rather then, blowjob, anal and so on. Enough ramblings, Leave comment, stay awesome! /shiin
Comments
thank you! glad to hear it ^^
Shiin
2014-10-05 00:04:19 +0000 UTCI'm a bastard aint I ;D and thanks!
Shiin
2014-10-05 00:03:46 +0000 UTCGreat comic so far !!! Can't wait for the next pages !!!
City Hunter
2014-10-04 10:29:48 +0000 UTCI liked a lot how this one is going, and you left it just at the exact point for maximun teasing, very good job!
Ace
2014-10-04 08:41:07 +0000 UTCit does seem like that would be the most reasonble way to go : )
Shiin
2014-10-04 03:34:47 +0000 UTCYeah you need to change the pledge before the the new month. Send a pm about things that involve pledges and rewards, I sent you a message. cheers!
Shiin
2014-10-04 03:33:48 +0000 UTCHey Shiin, i recently switched to 10$ a month but did not receive the comic pictures.
2014-10-04 03:08:03 +0000 UTCI'd think the natural direction to take it would be her being shocked he's so big, him asking her if she'd like to try it out, and going into a blowjob, but you can probably figure out something better ^^
Smutfan
2014-10-04 01:24:51 +0000 UTC
