"Nightmare Pigs" Announcement!
Added 2024-07-05 22:00:14 +0000 UTCDid you enjoy "Nightmare Pigs"? If so, I have good news. "Nightmare Pigs 2" is coming! I have taken up the commission from the same person who commissioned the original story. (And if that person wishes to reveal themselves, they may choose to do so.)
What will it be about? I know, but I'm not going to tell you just yet. Feel free to theorize below.
But wait, there's more!
I would like to do a patreon exclusive cut epilogue for "Nightmare Pigs" so this is the place for you to tell me what you'd like to see in that. A third post with a story suggestions call this week? Wild!
You feel free to just talk about what you liked about the story here. I'd love to know your thoughts!
Comments
Oooooo. I like how this parallel structure of things makes this even more like Nightmare on Elm Street. The thing is, the way the rules of magic in my world basically goes is that when the transformation happens, the magic reshapes reality just enough so that people don't think about it too much. They find the logic. So to feel like people are getting picked off one by one requires an amount of awareness that I would need to find a way to justify, which is possible. I will say, I have already gone over the basic outline with the commissioner, so I don't think we'll get much of the parallel structure idea in this one, but hey if somebody else wants to commission #3 I think there could be legs there. I certainly think Scarlet as a character and the path that she's clearly on is primed to take a darker turn.
BS Writer
2024-07-18 17:30:19 +0000 UTCLike I said in the final post it's a great story great ending. I really like Marjorie being this light and this caring person I'm assuming she'll have nothing to do with the sequel. What I liked about the story in the beginning had this figure who was meant to be scary and the reveal was that she was actually doing it out of love and protecting her kid. She was sending Karma to the way of these horrible people who would probably become way more horrible if they're allowed to continue down this path. Now however if you do a sequel given how the first one ended I can't imagine she's going to be as fair to everybody else. I'm assuming she's going to go on a Power Trip and while the new victims might be deserve it in some way it may not deserve it like these girls did. Maybe you could do a story from both perspectives where the victims are aware this is happening and they try to fight back against her. Unlike the original story where you're just getting picked off one by one by this Unstoppable Force. That's all I have to say there's no way you greenlit this and you don't have any ideas of where it's going so I'm not going to waste my breath.Looking forward to it though.
Searcher
2024-07-18 17:12:01 +0000 UTC
