The Fat Making Notebook Works for You: Suggestions Call
Added 2024-06-20 13:48:02 +0000 UTCHey, Everybody!
I figured since “One of Those Fat Making Notebooks” really took off and hopefully the rest of the sequels will too, I figured now was a good time to open the door for suggestions as to where you, my wonderful and loyal Patreon patrons, want to see the stories go.
I am looking for the following:
1. Suggestions for settings for where Asami might take the notebook. For example, I already have “The Fat Making Notebook Goes to the Beach”, “The Fat Making Notebook Goes to the Mall”, and “The Fat Making Notebook Goes Back to School”. I’m looking for more settings that lead to eye catching titles with that old school pulpy serial vibe that also lend themselves to inspiration.
2. I’m looking for suggestions of specific transformation scenarios up to and including phrases that might be written in the notebook.
3. Any other ideas you have about the series.
I think I will likely make the next installment of the series as part of Fat Trimmings Volume 30, but I would also love to do a patreon specific Notebook story at some point.
As for Fat Trimmings Volume 28. I got a lot of suggestions for the last two volumes that I still want to go back a revisit, but I might work some ideas posted here into that as well.
Thanks for your time and suggestions.
Comments
These are really good specifics. I think the grocery store idea definitely sustains itself for a smaller Fat Trimmings story. And I think that’s how I see the series progressing, some stories just in Fat Trimmings and then the next one getting an extended cut.
BS Writer
2024-06-30 18:19:16 +0000 UTCIt may seem a little mundane, but somewhere like a grocery store or supermarket could be fun. Or a box store like Walmart that sells clothes and food. I could see a scene of Asami using the notebook on a woman after she enters a changing room with her excited by the reveal of the woman opening the door an obese blob not likely to flaunt her figure to other shoppers. Meanwhile a couple proclaiming how great their diet is going waddles from the greens section to pick up plenty of junk food after a run in
Axel Laperouge
2024-06-30 17:35:23 +0000 UTCAlso great. That could definitely work.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 22:16:51 +0000 UTCSome more ideas. Since Asami works at a modeling place. How about a fashion shoe or beauty pagent etc etc
Silver Star
2024-06-20 22:15:46 +0000 UTCOh yeah. That could also be a lot of fun.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 19:31:53 +0000 UTCOoooo. This is really cool. I'm going to have to file this away because it is definitely a great later story when she's really pushing the boundaries of what the notebook can do.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 19:31:38 +0000 UTCAn excellent idea. There's a lot of potential with this one.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 19:30:51 +0000 UTCThese are great. Gym is so clever and yet like yeah obviously gym. Fantastic. And you're right it is a million possible scenarios and I think reads well right away. I do also love the concert ideas. Very fun. I do love the cult following idea. You may have noticed that Asami has not always been completely careful about how she fattens people. So things might get noticed eventually. Also, not to spoil too much, but I have subtly been planting some seeds for future crossover stuff, some fairly obvious, some much less so and not even strictly in Fat Notebook focused stories.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 19:30:32 +0000 UTCYeah build out the lore of your existing stories. I’ve been testing ideas for AI work and storytelling so I like to find places for it where I don’t necessarily have to worry about explaining too many things within the world but gives me the freedom to really flesh it out. Cruises, Night clubs, and amusement parks are great for that. Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing more of your stories.
Q
2024-06-20 19:29:31 +0000 UTCSee, amusement park I did think of for some point. Cruise is so good. I'm glad I asked this question. Because that's like an obvious one that I hadn't thought of yet, and it's so perfect. If/when I do amusement park, I think it will be a generic created one. The fun thing about creating an original amusement park (besides not having to know all the things that already exist in Disney etc.) is that it can always come back in different stories.
BS Writer
2024-06-20 19:26:22 +0000 UTCMaybe a comic con
Silver Star
2024-06-20 18:37:00 +0000 UTCChannel Surfing would be a fun title for that.
KAzul
2024-06-20 18:32:59 +0000 UTCHave her watching TV and just flipping through channels fattening who she wants IDK
Silver Star
2024-06-20 15:41:55 +0000 UTCWhat about at a nightclub? I see a few potential targets being fattened up by drinks or dancing on the dance floor
Krockman18
2024-06-20 14:45:25 +0000 UTC1. One of the most obvious places to visit would be a gym. I could see messing with a lot of different work out based shenanigans there. Another could be a music festival. Having a popular singer just plump up on stage while beefy with a heavier singer she bad mouths sounds really fun. 2. Every piece of gym equipment causes the person to gain weight where it targets. Dance aerobics turning into a belly dance. I wouldn’t mine seeing someone get so big that they’re stuck on a piece of equipment. They gotta pry her out. Someone goes for a stage dive and each persons hand that holds them up adds additional lbs 3. The Fatnote gets a cult following. Maybe some blogger obsessed with her exploits documents it all causing her to give them a visit to try and stop it. Someone who has a Fat Note, is inspired by the protag but uses it for evil. The people the antag uses are all good folk, who don’t deserve the karmic justice. Could see a potential fat fight between them bring funny. Either that or a long plot thread of the other side where more mean stories are told. Or maybe they’re just a hired gun, accepting payment to fatten innocent folk and take down rivals of people who do deserve punishment. A detective who seeks out the Fat Note not to stop it but to give targets. Maybe they try and black mail them, ending in a funny punishment.
KAzul
2024-06-20 14:16:47 +0000 UTCHow about a cruise? That allows for more of an isolated situation plus you could expand it if you want. The other option would be like an amusement park, or even Disney or Universal.
Q
2024-06-20 13:49:35 +0000 UTC
