Retrospective: Not Okay, Cupid
Added 2023-02-22 23:42:43 +0000 UTCSometimes you just gotta do the R.L. Stine method and come up with the semi-funny title first. That's how this started.
Then the rest filled it. It's a cute little short story. A few good puns here and there. Like the diaper being a giant "Luvs". And the fun careful wording of promises gone wrong. "You'll get your dick wet every day".
That sort of thing.
It's definitely not my most profound piece, but it's a good, fun, light read about a neglectful boyfriend getting way more love than he bargained for.
Comments
I really liked this one. Strangely, it hit a lot of buttons for me haha
2023-02-23 18:15:41 +0000 UTCYou say it's not profound and all, but I liked it! I'm always up for Cupid shenanigans, even of a different variety. Just the right amount of mean and that has a long detailed changing scene in the middle. I dig it! π
Pelo Dee
2023-02-23 07:32:15 +0000 UTC
