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The New Narnia- Chapter 60: Finale

Chapter 60- Finale

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About every 10 chapters I have gone back and read the story from the beginning. And then you finished the story and suddenly I was no longer in a rush to read it, I didn't want it to end. Again congrats on a job well done and thank you!

Congrats! And well done Sir.

I’m a little saddened to see it end, but such a wonderful ending. One of my favorite stories of yours.

Ikr?! Lol, Tommy deserves a little cush at least. By the end of the chapter, I was really rooting for permanent regression😆. Constantly monitoring oneself and planning bathroom breaks is in of itself such a burden as an adult. Add compulsory work for survival and the absence of unconditional love and why would anyone want to be grown? 🤪

Wow an amazing ending. Though part of me wonders what would have happened if she wrote her name first?

Wonderful buddy :) Just amazingly wonderful,, though do wonder is Tommy in pullups at least :3

There were a few errors that I found (maybe others that I didn't, but whatever) and I thought you'd want to know so you might take care of them. I was going to DM you with them, but I'm not sure that there is a way to do that here, so I'll send you one on DD. :-)

Wow! This ending was just as complicated but even more imaginative than I thought it would have to be! Your plotting always impresses the heck out of me, and this is one of your best stories (second only to "Unfair" imho). Thank you for it, and congratulations for completing the journey.

Wow. Just wow. That was an amazing adventure. Thank you

Guilend

Here's hoping we get an Amanda spinoff. :D

Congratulations on finishing an epic, and imaginative, tale!

babysofia1234


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