The New Narnia- Chapter 60: Finale
Added 2022-09-18 18:37:26 +0000 UTCChapter 60- Finale
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About every 10 chapters I have gone back and read the story from the beginning. And then you finished the story and suddenly I was no longer in a rush to read it, I didn't want it to end. Again congrats on a job well done and thank you!
2023-01-19 21:49:16 +0000 UTCCongrats! And well done Sir.
2023-01-19 21:46:40 +0000 UTCI’m a little saddened to see it end, but such a wonderful ending. One of my favorite stories of yours.
2022-09-28 17:29:58 +0000 UTCIkr?! Lol, Tommy deserves a little cush at least. By the end of the chapter, I was really rooting for permanent regression😆. Constantly monitoring oneself and planning bathroom breaks is in of itself such a burden as an adult. Add compulsory work for survival and the absence of unconditional love and why would anyone want to be grown? 🤪
2022-09-21 04:14:00 +0000 UTCWow an amazing ending. Though part of me wonders what would have happened if she wrote her name first?
2022-09-19 18:48:04 +0000 UTCWonderful buddy :) Just amazingly wonderful,, though do wonder is Tommy in pullups at least :3
2022-09-19 18:00:06 +0000 UTCThere were a few errors that I found (maybe others that I didn't, but whatever) and I thought you'd want to know so you might take care of them. I was going to DM you with them, but I'm not sure that there is a way to do that here, so I'll send you one on DD. :-)
2022-09-19 16:00:56 +0000 UTCWow! This ending was just as complicated but even more imaginative than I thought it would have to be! Your plotting always impresses the heck out of me, and this is one of your best stories (second only to "Unfair" imho). Thank you for it, and congratulations for completing the journey.
2022-09-19 15:59:50 +0000 UTCWow. Just wow. That was an amazing adventure. Thank you
Guilend
2022-09-19 03:42:09 +0000 UTCHere's hoping we get an Amanda spinoff. :D
2022-09-19 01:30:59 +0000 UTCCongratulations on finishing an epic, and imaginative, tale!
babysofia1234
2022-09-18 19:39:37 +0000 UTC