"Thrill Seeker" P. 10 Full Lines and P. 7 Panel 1 Redraw
Added 2023-05-08 05:22:42 +0000 UTCI hope someone gifts me that exact truck once this is all said and done because I am legitimately suffering, haha. Page 11 Lines will be done tomorrow and the colors have already begun on the first half of the comic. I will release those in 2 batches rather than page by page, and then revisions!
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Hmm, maybe the eyebrows could be a little more expressive? Some wild stuff going on I imagine, those eyebrows would be working overdrive.
Ely
2023-05-09 03:40:45 +0000 UTCYah and her hairline/facial structure is a lot better there. I'm still slowly figuring out how to get what's in my head directly on the page and it is getting closer and closer with every installment. And what the heck do you know about the 1973 Ford Ram Z10 Super Sport? Get out of my face with that.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2023-05-08 07:08:58 +0000 UTCI like the changes to Ellie's hair to show the wind swirling around her as it comes. As for the truck (pushes glasses up on nose) "Akshully, the rear running lights on that model would have been about 6 inches lower and 3 inches closer to the rear - personally I suggest a complete redo. Worst. Comic. Ever. "
Shane Openo
2023-05-08 05:43:12 +0000 UTCI don't really like Eli's panels here but we'll see how I feel when the second half colors begin.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2023-05-08 05:29:41 +0000 UTC
