Let me check on you quickly...
Added 2023-10-20 19:53:08 +0000 UTCHopping out of the little Fanfiction for a moment, I hope you don't mind π
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Closely monitor, I agree π
Sinnaea
2023-10-21 03:09:33 +0000 UTCππ
Midnight Chrysanth
2023-10-21 00:56:51 +0000 UTCOmg π³π₯Ί those angles
ORI
2023-10-20 23:39:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback I haven't written anything like this in 6 year's so sorry if it's difficult to read. I'm sure I can think of a part 2 but it might get a little steamy so fair warning π
Raiden2480
2023-10-20 22:16:22 +0000 UTCThink we should check on that...π
Midnight Chrysanth
2023-10-20 22:08:43 +0000 UTCIt actually wasn't planned like that, I wanted to have the lamp in the side background but the composition somehow always ended up like this - and now that I read your interpretation, that's sooo fitting, with the holy/maybe slightly unholy side ππ Damn! Ohhh really? π₯Ί I am so honored when people do that (do people do that, idk xD but you do it and I am blushing π )
Midnight Chrysanth
2023-10-20 22:08:17 +0000 UTCWell....I want to know how it goes on, that's what I think π And I am sure, Chris wants that, too ππ I am not a fan of smoking but I somehow like the feel of the description of it (and also use that in my Fanfictions as well), like the tobacco (maybe not like the typical cigarette cold smoke smell but...richer? With more flavour?) - I can totally feel that with your description of the moment of warmth in Chris' arms, that's so fitting and moody.
Midnight Chrysanth
2023-10-20 22:06:22 +0000 UTCSo what do you think π
Raiden2480
2023-10-20 20:49:04 +0000 UTCI think I have a fever π€ π₯΅
Sinnaea
2023-10-20 20:24:35 +0000 UTCOh dear lord...this is what it must be like having visions of Mary or waking up in heaven. I love how the light works as an Halo giving the saint like look and just stepping aside calls in the naughty side as if Rebecca wants to step or sit on you...this is an amazing point of view. Using the holy one now in my pc wallpaper roll ππ include you in my night prayers for this awesome pieceππ
The Priest
2023-10-20 20:21:27 +0000 UTC...Chris be like....π...ππ....π....π₯΅
Midnight Chrysanth
2023-10-20 20:14:25 +0000 UTC*Chris are you OK do you want me to treat your wounds?* Rebecca ask in concern. *Sure Rebecca thank you for this I'm surprised you are taking this so well considering what we faced so far* Chris replies. Rebecca looks at him and says *believe me it's not easy* she whispers. Chris looks at her and noticed that she was shaking so he walks over to her and holds her by the shoulders while asking what was wrong. Suddenly she darts forward and hugs him tightly while releasing a tiny sob. He felt his heart ache at the sound so all he does is hold her in a tight embrace. Minutes pass in silence as Chris gives Rebecca time to collect her emotions and steady her breathing. While in his arms Rebecca is hit with the smell of tobacco smoke and the feeling of safety that he brings her in this moment. As she wipes away her tears she is struck by how warm his gaze is and how he didn't judge her for her lapse in control. She also saw how tired he looked from the bags under his eyes to the tension in his jaw. Her heart beat picked up as she thought of one way to help him relieve his stress. She guided him towards the bed in the corner and told him to sit down and relax...
Raiden2480
2023-10-20 20:10:57 +0000 UTC
