Brother Complex 119
Added 2018-04-27 14:25:05 +0000 UTCand oof to the changing room they go :D
having problems representing jack and frank relationship, how you think it is in your eyes? let me know
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thanks, that's ok, I m glad it did not come out as he hates him but that he is mostly absent thats good because is what I wanted to try protrait here
N647
2018-04-29 02:17:36 +0000 UTCwell she get to "escort" jack home right ^^
N647
2018-04-29 02:16:37 +0000 UTCit is, she has big hands and strengh to manage a high caliber weapons :3
N647
2018-04-29 02:16:22 +0000 UTCthanks, I intend to be going back to that shortly finishing this arc, already doign that with the girls sharing some time at the changing room again? let me know what where your favorite past pages then to have a better idea ofthe direction you want?
N647
2018-04-29 02:15:51 +0000 UTCThis story used to be cute and sexy. Now it’s getting weird and off track. I’m loosing interest but willing to wait a couple more weeks to see if this gets good before canceling my pledge.
Blur128
2018-04-28 12:07:35 +0000 UTCI just realized that the handgun Rose has holstered on her thigh must be huge considering how big she is. Really friggin big, like a deagle or something.
Luufman
2018-04-28 01:55:47 +0000 UTCRose seem happy ^_^
2018-04-27 15:49:50 +0000 UTCIt's clear that the two don't see each other often, and the dad's a "spends too much time at work" type, but beyond that, it's somewhat unclear about Jack's overall feelings towards his dad besides being angry he put Rose through this. Hope this is the kinda feedback you were looking for.
SukkuroKun
2018-04-27 15:03:04 +0000 UTC
