Evil Inc After Dark Stories — Baalor
Added 2022-03-13 00:00:03 +0000 UTCYou may remember Baalor from a recent EiAD (below). He's a genie that granted the wish of a young couple who wanted to start a family. I wanted to try something new* and write a non-comics story that went deeper into this scene. It tells about how Baalor came into their lives — and what happened afterwards. As with all exclusives, please don't distribute/repost!
This is way outside of my comfort zone, so I'll be interested in hearing your thoughts! I've prepared this in two file formats — EPUB and PDF — for your reading enjoyment. It will probably work best if you import it to an eBook app such as Apple's Books app.
EPUB: Evil Inc After Dark Stories - Baalor
PDF: Evil Inc After Dark Stories - Baalor
*I actually tried this a couple times before — about five years ago — and it got mixed reviews. You can find the series here (or click the EI erotica tag below).
Comments
Even here "CommanderH" gets a shout out. That did make me chuckle. Makes me wonder of some of the other Chat Fans are heroes/villans too (Bull4You is maybeTaurus?). From a critique standpoint, your free form writing has improved a lot, in my opinion, from the Milking Minotaur stories.
Michael
2022-03-13 16:04:19 +0000 UTCThanks for that, Rick! 🙂 I’ve fixed the error. If you’ll re-download the file, you’ll have the corrected version!
Brad Guigar
2022-03-13 11:37:15 +0000 UTCTerrific!
Mr. Nobody
2022-03-13 02:05:37 +0000 UTCGreat read, although you have one continuity error. Page 5, paragraph 2, the narrator says "Steadying the camera in one hand, I freed my cock. I started stroking my member as if I were in a trance." But further down that page his "left hand furtively pawing my cock through the straining fabric of my slacks. Then on page 7 "Overcome, I used my free hand to unzip my pants. I threaded my shaft through the fly. Quietly, I began fisting my member."
Rick Greene
2022-03-13 01:55:58 +0000 UTCFantastic story. It's nice to see a genie/djinn who takes pride in their work. I hope you do more stuff like this in the future.
AuldMisdione
2022-03-13 00:53:15 +0000 UTC
