DevLog #29 - Natasha's Quest Outline

Natasha's story fit's her quite perfectly, I just think her playable character might need a minor tweak or two. Natasha seems to be a timid, shy and nerdy girl which is great although I'd probably suggest that she starts becoming more confident and the best version of herself as she progresses, so I'd probably picture her at first being the shy, timid and nervous girl but once she meets queen and becomes more confident in herself and her ability....she transitions into a more out there type of girl, total appearance make over, less nerdy but still knowledgeable. It's basically her coming out of her shell into a new light etc, if that makes sense 🤔

The ones I really like are: Her CG for when she is entertaining the drunk guests at her party; and her vagina animation at the brothel.

Sunrise and Moonlight

Oh okay, I never really got that vibe. Do you have any particular images you like of her? So that I can compare those faces to her sprite to better understand. I thought you didn't like her outfit and my mind immediately went to her outfit because I actually drew her original outfit 5 years ago and LNSC re-drew her with that same outfit. It wasn't very artistic coming from me. Same with Queen's outfit, I don't think it's super good because I created it, instead of an actual artist.

DPMaker

Oh my bad, I didn't specify which part looked bad. The outfit is honestly fine, no problems. Its actually the face. I dunno, in the CG she has nice symmetrical, long-ish face, which makes her so pretty. But her sprite's head is a tad too long. I wanted to get over it while playing, but its honestly too distracting, she's got a bit of horse face going on. I've been comparing her CG and sprite and I think whats distracting me is that her sprite's head is too sharp, too cone-y while her CG looks a but wider and more filled out.

Sunrise and Moonlight

Oh that's interesting. I wonder if we could spice her default outfit up to make her look more like a princess. Thanks for the feedback!!

DPMaker

Hey dp. I played the version of the game where you stopped to use another engine. I dunno if you changed something already, but I really do not like Scarlett's sprite. She is described to be very beautiful, and her CG's are amazing, but her sprite just doesn't do her justice. It honestly turned me off from her even though she is an amazing character. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I just think that if I feel this, some others might also feel the same way, and I wanted to let you know.

Sunrise and Moonlight